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  • AliceBlack

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    The song worked really well and I applaud you for that. I thought it was cute, a little obsessive, but cute
    September 3rd, 2009 at 06:29pm
  • messofadreamer

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    Oh my gosh; That was perfect <3. I love how you took the song and made it your own in a sense.

    Beautiful work <3.
    June 20th, 2009 at 07:57pm
  • feathers.everywhere

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    This was so sweet....I ended up crying in the middle for no reason.
    You are an amzing writer and the story really protrayed the song.
    June 19th, 2009 at 06:57pm
  • SignalFire

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    Wow this was amazing.
    I mean the plot was brilliant and I loved how Ryan knew about Brendon but never actually said anything. It was a really cute ending.
    Well done

    Ooh and your ava rocks too
    June 19th, 2009 at 01:49pm
  • Greta Morgan

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    thank you! your comments mean alot to me.
    June 19th, 2009 at 11:45am
  • N3g4r

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    wow you really did a good job on writing it, I mean the plot is not really long and it's simple but you describe it in a best way that it takes the reader until the end though the reader knows kinda what will happen:)

    I like how you described Brendon's feelings and how he went there every night while he thinks Ryan doesn't realize!
    June 19th, 2009 at 11:37am
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