"First Try" Spin-Off - Comments

The song worked really well and I applaud you for that. I thought it was cute, a little obsessive, but cute

Oh my gosh; That was perfect <3. I love how you took the song and made it your own in a sense.

Beautiful work <3.

This was so sweet....I ended up crying in the middle for no reason.
You are an amzing writer and the story really protrayed the song.

Wow this was amazing.
I mean the plot was brilliant and I loved how Ryan knew about Brendon but never actually said anything. It was a really cute ending.
Well done

Ooh and your ava rocks too

thank you! your comments mean alot to me.

wow you really did a good job on writing it, I mean the plot is not really long and it's simple but you describe it in a best way that it takes the reader until the end though the reader knows kinda what will happen:)

I like how you described Brendon's feelings and how he went there every night while he thinks Ryan doesn't realize!