Let Me Count the Ways I Fell in Love With You - Comments

@ bellemonster
Ohhh my gosh... This story was three years ago. Haha! Wow. Thank you for taking the time to read though.
You're actually right. Haha. I find the story slightly rushed too when I re-read that story again after I submitted the whole thing.
I actually finished it in 5 days. I guess it kinda showed in the story. xD. Too bad I was too lazy to actually edit it... and proof-read. O.O (Now I'm just embarrassed by my laziness.)

But thanks for the advice! =)). I've been trying to improve on my writing over the years. Well, at least now I know what are the areas I should continue to improve on.

Thanks, again!

It's good, and it has REAL potential. The only thing I would change is making the story go slower, making it longer with more chapters and having feelings develop after awhile and not just suddenly, ya know? (: I think I would've liked it better if it were longer and Shane and T.A. had had time to develop feelings after an amount of time.... Also, you might want to proof-read a little more and separate the paragraphs (they get kinda long) and have enough space between each paragraph because otherwise its a little harder to read and doesn't look as neat ^-^ I liked the story, though! Great idea and the characters are good, you should just try developing them overtime because otherwise it seems rushed and awkward. :D hope this helps in some way!!!

I like it. ort of reminded me 'A walk to remember' except She didn't live. But I thought it was great.

I like it. ort of reminded me 'A walk to remember' except She didn't live. But I thought it was great.

VelveT LacE:

this is really good! i like it :) youre a good writter..
kind of reminds me of a walk to remember :P

Uh-oh.. Does it? Well, I'm sorry if it looks like a copyright... But, these characters and the storyline are all made up by me. Of course, excluding the lyrics and some of the quotes.
I'm sorry if it looks like I'm copying or anything. =S

But, thanks for your comments! =D. I'm happy.

Sorry, again.

this is really good! i like it :) youre a good writter..
kind of reminds me of a walk to remember :P

This actually reminds me a little of "A walk to remember". Especially chapter five and six. Just saying. It was a good movie.

I love all of the different personalities! They're all so conflicting. I can't wait to see how it turns out!

I like it!
:D