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  • walking.thin.lines

    walking.thin.lines (100)

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    it's working really well
    June 19th, 2009 at 10:54pm
  • The White Violin

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    Thanks! I'm trying to set the characters apart by two very different styles of writing.
    June 19th, 2009 at 02:37pm
  • walking.thin.lines

    walking.thin.lines (100)

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    I love it. The vocabulary is strong and it's like you are already getting to know the character as a real person and this is only the first chapter!
    June 19th, 2009 at 01:23pm
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