This seems dumb to reopen the topic but ohwell ^^ This is so cool... Defoo the best femmeslash Ive read... this would be cool with a few more chapters but meh ^^ Lovechabaii!
well written, with immaculate detail, and no sugar coated erotic censoring. I've never read anything like it, despite the "Hot as hell" depiction, you have made a lesbian encounter a sentimental, innocent yet naughty romp into ones imagination.
I applaud you, and not from a males POV, from a writers.
That was absolutely fantastic. One of the best femmeslash I've ever read. :) And I'm not saying that to be nice. It was really hot. And sweet. :D "That's what best friends are for." I loved how you ended that. Anyways, that was ah-mazing. You're a fantastic sex-scene writer. <3Cherry
thanks guys, i'd like to turn it into a story but i usually never finish a full-length story, i ramble a lot in them and it gets boring, but thanks a billion <3