I is finally all caught up with your story and I'm completely loving it! =D Ana and Matt need to get together now! D< They're perfect for each other! *stomps around* Update soon pretty please! =)
Wakeboarding is like water skiing except instead of being on two skis you're on a fatter version of a snowboard. So you get towed behind a boat on a board holding onto a rope, do tricks and hope you don't fall cuz water hurts! lol
:D:D:D:D:D If Matt ever went that far with me and ran way i would run after him and literally drag him back into the bedroom!!! This story is soo good and fun, i get propa excited when i see there's a new update for me to read!
Stupid king thinks I be the heir he got his mathicmaticals all messed up teehee!I can't want to seees moooooorreeeeee.Haha pitt bulls cant be named wimpy names.
Gosh! I just read this whole thing and its genius! I really love it and the personalities you have for the guys. I also like Matt's tentativeness and vulnerability at times. I can't wait to read more!
There are some things I like about this story, and some things that just bother me. Like Thane being Robert Pattinson, and her parents being named Bella and Edward (even if it is coincidence) and her weird birth name Anastasiarali or whatever just reminds me of Renesmee and how her weird name was a combination of other people's names, too. I know you said you wrote this before Twilight, but geez there are a lot of similarities there.
I like the relationships between her and most of the guys, and I liked when she got revenge on her "sister" and got that bracelet. I don't think that her having the same name as Matt's traitorous ex is enough of a reason for him to have treated her so badly, and neither is her being half vampire. But I'm willing to overlook that. I'm just saying it's a stretch. Apparently he has some problems with showing his emotions, and maybe that's the real issue.
I find it weird that Jimmy would be the Alpha when Matt and Brian would clearly be the strongest, and there is never any reason given for why Jimmy is the alpha.
I like the pacing on the hookup, though. It's tantalizing.
I'm just really conflicted with how I feel about this story. But you apparently have me hooked here with something, because I read about 13 chapters of it, and intend to read more. So whatever you are doing, keep doing it. ;) And maybe someday I will figure out what it is. lol