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  • Shadow's Gates

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    this is such an amazing story!
    July 26th, 2009 at 09:29am
  • Synyster_Shadows

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    I is finally all caught up with your story and I'm completely loving it! =D Ana and Matt need to get together now! D< They're perfect for each other! *stomps around* Update soon pretty please! =)
    July 23rd, 2009 at 09:53pm
  • S a m .

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    Hey there... I made you a banner for this! It took like an hour and a half, but I did it and I like it. Here is what it looks like: Image]

    And here is the link banner

    There is this one too! Image

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    July 18th, 2009 at 08:57am
  • Sweet Indecision

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    Okay, im completely in love with this story. I just found it and i'm already hookes, so please keep writing! :D
    July 15th, 2009 at 09:43pm
  • Sailor Meranda

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    Loved the update, hope you have fun on your trip when you go. : )
    July 15th, 2009 at 09:55am
  • DaniVendetta

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    Wakeboarding is like water skiing except instead of being on two skis you're on a fatter version of a snowboard. So you get towed behind a boat on a board holding onto a rope, do tricks and hope you don't fall cuz water hurts! lol
    July 15th, 2009 at 08:28am
  • bloodravyn

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    wat is wakeboarding?
    July 15th, 2009 at 06:39am
  • S a m .

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    AHHH!!!! I want more!! Gosh I sound like a snob... Please update soon!! *pout*
    July 13th, 2009 at 07:20am
  • bloodravyn

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    thane is a pathetic little worm!
    July 13th, 2009 at 04:51am
  • Whatshisface

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    If Matt ever went that far with me and ran way i would run after him and literally drag him back into the bedroom!!!
    This story is soo good and fun, i get propa excited when i see there's a new update for me to read!
    July 13th, 2009 at 03:46am
  • Morgan_Dawn54

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    WOOT WOOT!!!!!

    Stupid king thinks I be the heir he got his mathicmaticals all messed up teehee!I can't want to seees moooooorreeeeee.Haha pitt bulls cant be named wimpy names.
    July 12th, 2009 at 09:14pm
  • Kissing_Coffins6661

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    What does Thane know about her?!
    Awesome update!!
    Can't wait for more!
    July 12th, 2009 at 07:37pm
  • M-M-MEGAN!

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    YESSS!!

    HIGH FIVEEEE!

    that was an awesome chapter! and i can't believe matt just ran away like that.
    and Thane is soooooo creepy, and he's Ana's cousin.. Ewwwwww
    July 12th, 2009 at 03:52pm
  • ButterflyWarmth

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    Gosh! I just read this whole thing and its genius! I really love it and the personalities you have for the guys. I also like Matt's tentativeness and vulnerability at times. I can't wait to read more!
    July 12th, 2009 at 11:29am
  • Shadow's Gates

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    YAY! UPDATE!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!
    July 12th, 2009 at 10:53am
  • Brian's Sex Toy

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    There are some things I like about this story, and some things that just bother me. Like Thane being Robert Pattinson, and her parents being named Bella and Edward (even if it is coincidence) and her weird birth name Anastasiarali or whatever just reminds me of Renesmee and how her weird name was a combination of other people's names, too. I know you said you wrote this before Twilight, but geez there are a lot of similarities there.

    I like the relationships between her and most of the guys, and I liked when she got revenge on her "sister" and got that bracelet. I don't think that her having the same name as Matt's traitorous ex is enough of a reason for him to have treated her so badly, and neither is her being half vampire. But I'm willing to overlook that. I'm just saying it's a stretch. Apparently he has some problems with showing his emotions, and maybe that's the real issue.

    I find it weird that Jimmy would be the Alpha when Matt and Brian would clearly be the strongest, and there is never any reason given for why Jimmy is the alpha.

    I like the pacing on the hookup, though. It's tantalizing.

    I'm just really conflicted with how I feel about this story. But you apparently have me hooked here with something, because I read about 13 chapters of it, and intend to read more. So whatever you are doing, keep doing it. ;) And maybe someday I will figure out what it is. lol
    July 12th, 2009 at 07:52am
  • vivvy09

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    LOVE IT!!!! CAN'T WAIT 4 MORE!!!
    July 12th, 2009 at 07:34am
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    I loke the update!
    Wonder whats up with matt?? hm....
    Oh well more soon!!! :tehe:
    July 12th, 2009 at 06:24am
  • M-M-MEGAN!

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    if you update.
    I'll go to my co worker and tell him that I want to fuck him like a crazy beast :]
    lol
    July 12th, 2009 at 01:19am
  • Yeah?

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    i loveee sweet mattyyy!
    July 11th, 2009 at 07:24pm