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  • Lishness

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    Awwww thats so cute :XD
    December 5th, 2007 at 04:51am
  • Lishness

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    Awwwwwwww she remembered him, but will she remember chrono? that is the question hehe
    October 25th, 2007 at 11:44pm
  • Lishness

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    WOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!
    October 1st, 2007 at 10:45pm
  • xXDark-ArtemisXx

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    YES M'AM! -salutes- xDD...
    October 1st, 2007 at 07:01pm
  • Unicorn Parade

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    Heyhey. :D
    You put Joshua in...good...
    But leaving it as "Oh she must've lost the memory of her brother along with the memory of the both of you together" isn't enough.
    It leaves the readers wondering "Then what will happen to Joshua?" or "...So he's just going to be left like that?"
    So you gotta find a chance to tie everything up nicely, okay? :D

    Great chapter as always. ^^
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    October 1st, 2007 at 04:01pm
  • Unicorn Parade

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    AHA.
    AT LAST. :D
    *screams*
    Love the way you write. Seriously. ><

    Mind being my beta for stories, btw? =l
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    September 11th, 2007 at 05:40pm
  • Lishness

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    how long before they start remembering each other... together!!!!! more PWEASE?!?!?!?!
    September 11th, 2007 at 02:47am
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    hehheh cp...rossette's ALWAYS mean...sorta =D
    September 6th, 2007 at 05:26pm
  • Unicorn Parade

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    *cheer*
    RUI SI. YOU UPDATE SO FAST. :cheese:
    Anyways, this chapter was particularly sweet, and the game was so...CUTE. =D
    ...Rossette's being a little mean. =l
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    September 6th, 2007 at 04:51pm
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    ahahaha...blissliss, sorry but i have no idea what's in the presents...it's not important though =D
    September 6th, 2007 at 12:36pm
  • Lishness

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    wooooo.... WHAT'S IN THE PRESENTS????????????
    September 6th, 2007 at 12:33am
  • Lishness

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    wooooooooo... great chapter
    September 2nd, 2007 at 03:27pm
  • Unicorn Parade

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    *nods*
    Rui Si, you update fast ehh? xD
    Anyhow. Great Chapter as always! ^^

    I got an account on Fanfiction(dot)net le. x)
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    September 2nd, 2007 at 02:57pm
  • Unicorn Parade

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    More when you can! xD

    ...Can't wait for a certain scene to pop out tho...Shifty
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    September 1st, 2007 at 12:36pm
  • Lishness

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    :XD
    September 1st, 2007 at 04:32am
  • Lishness

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    hmmmm interesting.... very interesting.... MORE PWEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    September 1st, 2007 at 04:32am
  • Lishness

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    hehe it's great Smiley
    August 4th, 2007 at 05:27pm
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    Hope you evoke more romantic tension in the trial =) Don't know how the Elder could see Azmaria's cd, though. Update soon, I'll get my story up one of these days.
    August 4th, 2007 at 09:49am
  • Unicorn Parade

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    :lmfao
    Loved the ending. The Elder is a pervert! :shock:

    Anyways...the concept of 'A life for a Life'....pretty darn cool.
    Loved the part where you described Chrno getting distracted by that pocket watch.

    Update this soon!
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    August 3rd, 2007 at 09:27pm
  • Lishness

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    brilliant start
    too many bright colours lol
    August 1st, 2007 at 08:14pm
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