Nice update. Poor Jimmy; you'd think that someone would help him by now. But JImbo would have to wanna help himself first... And poor Z, he knew exactly how long he was with Gena; he must have been really, really crushed when he found out. Not a lot of guys will bother with counting weeks and days like that. I'm looking forward to more!
It's a pretty good story. I just wish you did your formatting a little differently so that chapters were a bit easier to read. But it's got great content! I'm looking forward to reading more!