cuute! eww, my mom would never say something THAT direct, but I dread the day she asks. she always tries to be "cool". I'm sure our parents would get along. -_-""
Yeah, it's really good. But, uh, why the hell is Avery a dumbass enough to go up to him again after she's barely safe again? She needs a little dose of common sense.
i don't think it's fair of you to be demanding comments. although i love your story your actions are going to make me unsubscribe. but unfortunately i know that this will be the "fifth" comment you were waiting for, so here we go, your story is amazing! dont stop writing it. that good enough?