Evan - Comments

This was so sad but great.
I liked it.

This was so powerful and beautiful. It was really great.
It included so much and it wasn't boring at all!

This is for sure one of the most amazing 1,000-words stories I’ve read so far, especially because it includes so many things. It’s not only the beautiful way you write everything, because seem to fall from your keyboard as if you’re a natural born at it, and I couldn’t help but love what you wrote, and especially the way you wrote it. I found myself leaning in closer to the screen while reading some parts, not because they were intense or completely exciting as an action movie, but because I was so delighted with every single expression you used. I remember that, from the very first line I read, I was totally drooling over the words and their meaning, because this was just that beautiful. I really, really loved it.
One of my favorite parts was Evan’s willingness to die because he couldn’t live in pain anymore and because he knew there was nothing more he could fight for. Sure, he still had Anna, but he knew that she also needed to move on from him, because he felt and somehow knew that he couldn’t be saved. And the fact that he only needed a story to die in peace, that definitely was so beautiful, but it sure didn’t overcome the story itself. I loved how it all was told with so many emotions, especially as the oxygen tank was beeping and signaling what Anna wanted to avoid, but that Evan knew wouldn’t be possible to ignore.

“My moon goddess has returned to me tonight..
That was the line that made it for me; I immediately knew I had found one of the most beautiful stories ever, and you’re definitely an amazing writer. I loved how the moon story fit the occasion and the panorama they were in; it was just so beautiful. I don’t consider this story a cliché, because even that the whole death thing is very seen in stories and definitely in real life, the whole moon details only made it more beautiful and unique. I loved it for it.
Thanks for such a brilliant story (:

omg!!! that was soooo amazing and soooo sad :( but you are a brilliantly talented writer!!

D: My story was NOT sad in comparison to that one.
Saying you have no chance to win against my story is a lie, because yours was amazing in comparison to mine.
Good luck.

way to make me cry D:
hahaaa i kid i kid XD
but yes, it was incredible i really liked it (:

This was positively beautiful. That's all I can say.