LOL. This one made me laugh so much. I really love this story. I usually hate Twilight related stories because their a little too cliche, but I can tell this one isn't. I hope you updeate very soon!
I have to say, normally I don't read stories related to Twilight... or any previously written books, for that matter. But frankly, I'm really glad that I decided to read this one. You're such an amazing writer, and you keep me fascinated the whole way through the story, even with descriptions. Can't wait to read whatever else you have planned. =]
Out of all the stories I've read by you, I think this one might be my favourite. Which is saying something because I LOVE ALL YOUR STORIES!! I swear, you can do no wrong...kinda makes me a little green around the edges. Lol.
LOVED the chapter. The jabs between Paul and Seth do not fail to make me laugh.They remind me of two of my friends = ) Can't wait for more!! x
haha i love this so much! and even though it's a Jacob story, i like how you've got her involved with Quil. kinda goes to show that not everything works out the way people think...like a nice twist on the story, ya know?
Paul and Seth are too funny! they remind me of two of my friends from school..they're absolute idiots around each other (and i mean idiots in the nicest possible way haha)
keep them coming!!! its getting really awesome!! why didnt they like her at first? its like they thought that she would kill them if she even thought about them let alone talk to them so whats their problem?? udate again!!