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  • ArielAdrenaline.

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    This is really funny(:
    February 5th, 2009 at 11:57pm
  • Captain John Hart

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    “My bladder was going to explode! You sat on it for so fucking long I was afraid I’d piss on you.”

    “Ooooh, kinky.”

    Yes, definitely kinky.

    And if you kiss me I’m going to bite you!

    But where abouts will you bite?

    “If I kiss you will you shut the fuck up and let me sleep?”

    “….Yes.”

    “Fine!”

    So childish and so funny. =)
    February 5th, 2009 at 10:29pm
  • folie a dru.

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    I laughed out loud.

    “You take creepy to a whole other level.” The older man said.
    So amusing.

    “Fine, then you have to blow me.”

    “Forget it! I will not put your cock anywhere near my mouth! I don’t care what you do to me, that ain’t happening. Now get the fuck out so I can piss!”

    “I don’t feel like it. I’ve found this counter quite comfortable.”
    And this. This is just... it fits in perfectly with where mine started off but you carried it over to somewhere new that I probably wouldn't have.
    Kud-os.
    Me loves<333
    February 5th, 2009 at 05:27pm
  • Captain John Hart

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    Tehe. I like that one of them didn't know the other had seen him naked. It's very awesome reading conversations like that.
    February 5th, 2009 at 12:11pm
  • colored-euphoria

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    I love it! Especially how their just talking, but you describe everything in the dialog!
    February 5th, 2009 at 12:09am
  • Spanish Lullaby

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    Wow, I can't believe this story made a comeback! Don't get me wrong, I'm thrilled. Good job, hon. More soon?
    February 4th, 2009 at 02:59am
  • Captain John Hart

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    I love the stop coping me parts. It's so funny when you do that to people in life but it's really funny to read too. =)

    The end line is making me laugh. Though hopefully there wont be anymore problems with homosexuality. *giggles*
    February 3rd, 2009 at 10:39pm
  • Unapologetic Apathy

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    Ahhhhhhhh!!!!

    Tiffy!!!

    It's amazing!!

    I love it and can't wait for more!!!

    Ugh, boyscouts.

    Update spoon!!
    February 3rd, 2009 at 12:32pm
  • folie a dru.

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    Unapologetic Apathy:
    Update Spoon?
    I don't write My Chem anymore.
    February 1st, 2009 at 07:41pm
  • Unapologetic Apathy

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    I think Frank and Gerard...

    I think...

    I'm sad you won finish this,

    I wish you would... It's really good...

    Update Spoon?
    January 31st, 2009 at 11:14pm
  • Cyanide Nightmare.

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    Haha.. this is really funny. :lmfao
    Update soon!
    July 6th, 2008 at 06:10am
  • Vanya Hargreeves.

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    lmfao!
    I love it
    April 5th, 2008 at 06:24pm
  • death_pixie

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    New Reader - Ha! I loved that it was great. More soon please.

    I like how you have to actually pay attention to this as it's just dialogue and you don't get it all on your plate ready for you if you get what I mean lol!
    January 28th, 2008 at 05:25am
  • GenRage

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    HAHAHHA, this is so amazing.
    more when you can?
    <3
    January 6th, 2008 at 12:08am
  • Captain John Hart

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    New reader.
    this is really good and funny.
    More soon please?
    *subscribes*
    December 23rd, 2007 at 08:52pm
  • KATAL

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    The story seems abandoned, and that makes me sad. But, I'll try to inspire something with my comment. Too bad I have probably no creativity, which is why I spend my time going online reading awesome stories like this trying to get an idea that's just as cool. But the whole only-in-dialogue is going along brilliantly. I don't know how you do it. And nearly every line of this story has made me laugh. So, please? Please see if you can get any inspiration for this great story.
    December 19th, 2007 at 10:49am
  • ConnieGhettotech

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    Frank and bob?
    December 3rd, 2007 at 06:41am
  • Mrs. Melting Crayons

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    I love this story...it's hilarious.

    It's also really amazing how you're able to tell a story through nothing but dialogue. It's so original, and you did it really, really will.

    And it's kind of hard to guess the pairing...*thinks*
    November 21st, 2007 at 09:32am
  • xXxlikepiXiedustxXx

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    why has this never been update?
    i wanna find out who the pairing is
    September 24th, 2007 at 06:52am
  • t'lema

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    This is brilliant! Is it still going? If so, update soon, it's hilarious!
    August 16th, 2007 at 06:21am
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