A Kiss Is Like ... Emotional - Comments

This is really funny(:

“My bladder was going to explode! You sat on it for so fucking long I was afraid I’d piss on you.”

“Ooooh, kinky.”

Yes, definitely kinky.

And if you kiss me I’m going to bite you!

But where abouts will you bite?

“If I kiss you will you shut the fuck up and let me sleep?”

“….Yes.”

“Fine!”

So childish and so funny. =)

I laughed out loud.

“You take creepy to a whole other level.” The older man said.
So amusing.

“Fine, then you have to blow me.”

“Forget it! I will not put your cock anywhere near my mouth! I don’t care what you do to me, that ain’t happening. Now get the fuck out so I can piss!”

“I don’t feel like it. I’ve found this counter quite comfortable.”
And this. This is just... it fits in perfectly with where mine started off but you carried it over to somewhere new that I probably wouldn't have.
Kud-os.
Me loves<333

Tehe. I like that one of them didn't know the other had seen him naked. It's very awesome reading conversations like that.

I love it! Especially how their just talking, but you describe everything in the dialog!

Wow, I can't believe this story made a comeback! Don't get me wrong, I'm thrilled. Good job, hon. More soon?

I love the stop coping me parts. It's so funny when you do that to people in life but it's really funny to read too. =)

The end line is making me laugh. Though hopefully there wont be anymore problems with homosexuality. *giggles*

Ahhhhhhhh!!!!

Tiffy!!!

It's amazing!!

I love it and can't wait for more!!!

Ugh, boyscouts.

Update spoon!!

Unapologetic Apathy:

Update Spoon?

I don't write My Chem anymore.

I think Frank and Gerard...

I think...

I'm sad you won finish this,

I wish you would... It's really good...

Update Spoon?

Haha.. this is really funny. :lmfao
Update soon!

lmfao!
I love it

New Reader - Ha! I loved that it was great. More soon please.

I like how you have to actually pay attention to this as it's just dialogue and you don't get it all on your plate ready for you if you get what I mean lol!

HAHAHHA, this is so amazing.
more when you can?
<3

New reader.
this is really good and funny.
More soon please?
*subscribes*

The story seems abandoned, and that makes me sad. But, I'll try to inspire something with my comment. Too bad I have probably no creativity, which is why I spend my time going online reading awesome stories like this trying to get an idea that's just as cool. But the whole only-in-dialogue is going along brilliantly. I don't know how you do it. And nearly every line of this story has made me laugh. So, please? Please see if you can get any inspiration for this great story.

Frank and bob?

I love this story...it's hilarious.

It's also really amazing how you're able to tell a story through nothing but dialogue. It's so original, and you did it really, really will.

And it's kind of hard to guess the pairing...*thinks*

why has this never been update?
i wanna find out who the pairing is

This is brilliant! Is it still going? If so, update soon, it's hilarious!