A Kiss Is Like ... Emotional - Comments

OMG.

I love this. @___@;
I'm kind of in love with all of your writing.
I've read a few things by you in the passed couple of minutes and it's like...nothing you write is bad in anyway. It's amusing, it's hot, it's just...wow.

I adore you. :3

I like this. It's a little hard to understand who is who at times. But I eventually figure it out. I like how witty this is. Keep it up!

Hehehe...
I like how it was written entirely in quotes.
Update soon please?

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-new reader-
Ohh I like the story how its all in conversation!
homosexual lip virginity - now I'm going to start randomly saying that. Thanks.

Can't wait for more!

I love it.
Can't wait to read more.

God I love this.

And as weird as this sounds, I love how there's no narration. I like trying to understand everything through dialog. You're like my English teacher now.

I liike this

Idk who it is but I'm imagining Frank and Gerard... or maybe Bob.

:lmfao
I love this story!

Ye-ay.It becomes kinky-er and kinky-er.And i like kinky slashes.I lurve them.So if you could please pm me when the next chapter's out,it would be perfect.If not,i'll look for it.
More soon.

I THINK I have a clue as to who it is, but I'm slow and I'm probably wrong.
I really like the way you write this; all dialogue. It makes it interesting by not exactly outright telling the reader what they're doing, but making them almost make it up. I really like that style.
Keep it up!
Bekah <3

This makes me giggle.
My sister walked in a read some of it.
She said it was funny.
My sister doesn't find anything funny.
xD
I think I know who it is.
=X You're probably too busy for a PM though. >.<

haha, this is pretty awesome. i get a bit confussed sometimes, not knowing who is saying whtat.
but it is awesome, and funny.
more please.
xxxxx

Two new chapters!
Happy reading.

xoxox
-Dru

YAY!
*dances*
But I still don't know who it is...
Hmm...
I don't know whether I should PM you or not.
I think I will.
I really love it. Dialogue owns.
xD

always makes me smile...

I love this story. =]
I love the way the older one acts so sarcastic and whatnot.
And I love the way the younger one's so... into it.
x33
I could imagine it as if I was there, right infront of the scene even without much detailed writing.
That's how much of a good writer you are.
^^ Update soon, if you have the time, please? =]

LMAO! This is sooo funny! i almost fell off my chair! Your a really good writer!

*Can't stop giggling* I love how you can keep it down to dialogue and who's younger or older without giving anything else away. It's funny. Takes a good writer to be able to do that well.
-Erin

LOL this is cool XD The way the younger on teases the older one.. GOOORGEOUS <3

aww i cant wait anymore...write moreeeeee...i got 24 hours to think and tomorrow ill tell you the pair,okay.ill pm you....

gal,you make me think which is a rare moment..

ill pm you tomorrow with my answer.