Desperate, but Not Hopeless - Comments

I really liked this chapter.Please keep it up! :)

This Story Is My Lover. :P
More?! :D

I love it! Amazing as always can't wait for more!

this is the banner. i pictured Millie as her so if u pictured someone else ill be happy to change it:) & make future banners if need.
http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee324/JonasGrl818/bb-1.jpg

lol <3 it:) ill make u a banner:D

I love it! Amazing job! can't wait for more

Oh! I thought about that the first time, but I wasn't sure about it.
Then, I apologize, it's amazing haha

Yep. I Figured Something Like That Was Going To Happen.
I Love This Story Though. Can't Wait For The Next Chapter. (^_^)

Hmmm...I wonder whats gonna happen.
I think Shia had it planned for him to go see her at the bar (even though he didnt know what she did there).
I cant wait for the next chapter ^_^ Please dont take long!

this has the possiblitity to be great, i swear
because you have made a really great female lead character who is the worker, the one who has to work for what she has and you are having her meet someone who has everything
it is going to be very interestng and i like it so far
the only thing is the way that the writing is formatted (or structured like the person above me said) is like reading a script, which may be what you are shooting for, but it can make the story a bit impersonal and look plain when you are reading line after line, but if writing in that style is what is best for you then go ahead
but anyway-good story

I really liked this! I love the plot it's fairly interesting.
The only thing I don't really like is the way the dialogue is structured.
But other than that, you're doing amazing! I really really liked this

yayy new fic =D

and me likey =] i like how you make your original characters seem so real, and the borowed ones not seem fake, lol. and as always, i love your writing! and it isn't in script form! woo!
sold and subscribed :)

I love how you called me muffin when you told me about this. hehe

Anyhoo, I like it. Shia is cute in this.

I'm very happy that thereare starting to be more stories about Shia LaBeouf....I love him and I love your writing.
Please continue this story ^_^

I love this! Can not wait for more! And Shia is so adorable in this, ^.^

Aww. I Like It. (^____^)
Is She Sorta Oblivious, Or Does She Just Not Care That He's Hinting.?
I Luffs It. Subscribing Noww. :]