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  • Lady.V.

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    Okay, once again let's get started with the title. You could have come up with a better one I think, but it's your choice. I'm really picky when it comes to titles and if this wasn't a sequel, I wouldn't read it. :C

    As for the story it self, I was amazed to see that she had changed her name and moved on. The first thought when I heard of the name Van was that he was her ex, but then again I thought it couddn't be, because you can't just not recognize your ex. Maybe you didn't think of that? I don't know, but she should have guessed or even keep thinking it was him, even with a changed name. I mean there's his voice, things he used to do when they were together, habits...not everything changed, right? I mean no one changes completely.

    After Nick broke up with her Wednesday's roomie and they got close, I thought the two of them would end up together and in the next first chapters, she didn't seem to be getting together with Van, so I had high hopes for that. I even thought she would be with Nick, and after realizing how Van was they would just stay as friends and Van would be left heartbroken. Drama, I know, but it would be nice. c:

    I liked how she clicked with Van again and hanging out as friends, and even tried to set him up on a date, and after they found out who was who, I was expecting them to make up right away since Wednesday had told him about her dreams of her who was him. I enjoyed the edning though, a happy ending, who wouldn't want that?

    I give you three out of five stars for this. c:

    Overall, huge bonus for the bike locks, and minus for not realizing who he was.

    -Maria.
    January 10th, 2016 at 01:05pm
  • from mars.

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    Awww this chapter is so cute!!!
    I wish a guy would propose to me like that :P
    Awesome story :D
    I'm going to think about Van and Wednesday whenever I see bike locks now too XD
    July 29th, 2010 at 05:02pm
  • Classy Not Classic

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    CUTEST PROPOSAL EVER<3
    That was amazing, this and Locked Up. I loved it<3
    I cried at the end because it's over :( -lame-
    July 28th, 2010 at 06:31pm
  • woahtastic

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    AWWW!! i cried
    July 25th, 2010 at 06:02am
  • xVickii

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    This is such a great story! I loved it :) I'm gonna miss reading about Van and Wednesday too now ):
    July 24th, 2010 at 09:34am
  • Stay Awake

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    AWWW!!! that was so cute!!!! :D
    they're getrting married!!!! :D
    YAY! haha.
    update as soon as possibleeee :]
    July 23rd, 2010 at 11:17pm
  • Millerbrat

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    This is the most amazingly sweet. funny, romantic and just awesome that i have ever read on here i loved it.
    July 23rd, 2010 at 05:44pm
  • starbella

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    you could always do a sequel to a sequel x]
    July 23rd, 2010 at 08:32am
  • manderz11

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    absolutely incredible. I read both today and I LOVED IT!!!!
    sad that it's over though :(
    July 23rd, 2010 at 08:10am
  • ikickshins

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    Awhhhhhh.
    It's over. /:
    July 22nd, 2010 at 06:10pm
  • MoonlitTearsOfLove

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    Thats not true. OFcoarase you can still write about Van and Wednesday! We'd all be fine with that, I promise!
    July 22nd, 2010 at 05:22am
  • animestars

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    Well..I'm sad to see that it's over but I liked how you ended this chapter.
    Epilogue soon ? haha xxx
    July 22nd, 2010 at 12:08am
  • ikickshins

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    OMGZZZ.
    THE END?!
    Damn. >:/
    Well; I'm looking
    forward to the
    epilogue. :D
    July 17th, 2010 at 04:35pm
  • MoonlitTearsOfLove

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    that was so unfairly short...that epilogue better end it friggin right! lol, I'm seriously happy you redid this though...knowing they made it is seriously kewl. ima go check out ur new one nao!
    July 17th, 2010 at 05:13am
  • desigyal

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    CAN YOU PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL TO THIS?? ITS SOOOO AWESOME!
    July 16th, 2010 at 05:22pm
  • animestars

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    eck! it's coming to an end..ugh; can't wait to see how things turn out though

    you are awesome! ♥
    July 16th, 2010 at 09:09am
  • MoonlitTearsOfLove

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    I thot Van wuda bin at the door you tease!!! sigh...and i wud just like to point out...that getting tatoos of peoples names is supposed to be bad luck..like...really bad luck...just..FYI..but anyways... loved it. loved it loved it. and cuz i did, ima work on the newest chapter for TFN right nao!
    Much love
    MTOL
    July 16th, 2010 at 04:14am
  • MoonlitTearsOfLove

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    I thot Van wuda bin at the door you tease!!! sigh...and i wud just like to point out...that getting tatoos of peoples names is supposed to be bad luck..like...really bad luck...just..FYI..but anyways... loved it. loved it loved it. and cuz i did, ima work on the newest chapter for TFN right nao!
    Much love
    MTOL
    July 16th, 2010 at 04:14am
  • ikickshins

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    Holy shit.
    FINALLY. damn;
    Took you....
    26 chapters for them to get together. XD
    July 15th, 2010 at 04:58pm
  • lyssrus ;

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    M-M-M-MORE!

    Please? I'm dying here. =]
    July 15th, 2010 at 04:32am