Okay, once again let's get started with the title. You could have come up with a better one I think, but it's your choice. I'm really picky when it comes to titles and if this wasn't a sequel, I wouldn't read it. :C
As for the story it self, I was amazed to see that she had changed her name and moved on. The first thought when I heard of the name Van was that he was her ex, but then again I thought it couddn't be, because you can't just not recognize your ex. Maybe you didn't think of that? I don't know, but she should have guessed or even keep thinking it was him, even with a changed name. I mean there's his voice, things he used to do when they were together, habits...not everything changed, right? I mean no one changes completely.
After Nick broke up with her Wednesday's roomie and they got close, I thought the two of them would end up together and in the next first chapters, she didn't seem to be getting together with Van, so I had high hopes for that. I even thought she would be with Nick, and after realizing how Van was they would just stay as friends and Van would be left heartbroken. Drama, I know, but it would be nice. c:
I liked how she clicked with Van again and hanging out as friends, and even tried to set him up on a date, and after they found out who was who, I was expecting them to make up right away since Wednesday had told him about her dreams of her who was him. I enjoyed the edning though, a happy ending, who wouldn't want that?
I give you three out of five stars for this. c:
Overall, huge bonus for the bike locks, and minus for not realizing who he was.
Awww this chapter is so cute!!! I wish a guy would propose to me like that :P Awesome story :D I'm going to think about Van and Wednesday whenever I see bike locks now too XD
that was so unfairly short...that epilogue better end it friggin right! lol, I'm seriously happy you redid this though...knowing they made it is seriously kewl. ima go check out ur new one nao!
I thot Van wuda bin at the door you tease!!! sigh...and i wud just like to point out...that getting tatoos of peoples names is supposed to be bad luck..like...really bad luck...just..FYI..but anyways... loved it. loved it loved it. and cuz i did, ima work on the newest chapter for TFN right nao! Much love MTOL
I thot Van wuda bin at the door you tease!!! sigh...and i wud just like to point out...that getting tatoos of peoples names is supposed to be bad luck..like...really bad luck...just..FYI..but anyways... loved it. loved it loved it. and cuz i did, ima work on the newest chapter for TFN right nao! Much love MTOL
As for the story it self, I was amazed to see that she had changed her name and moved on. The first thought when I heard of the name Van was that he was her ex, but then again I thought it couddn't be, because you can't just not recognize your ex. Maybe you didn't think of that? I don't know, but she should have guessed or even keep thinking it was him, even with a changed name. I mean there's his voice, things he used to do when they were together, habits...not everything changed, right? I mean no one changes completely.
After Nick broke up with her Wednesday's roomie and they got close, I thought the two of them would end up together and in the next first chapters, she didn't seem to be getting together with Van, so I had high hopes for that. I even thought she would be with Nick, and after realizing how Van was they would just stay as friends and Van would be left heartbroken. Drama, I know, but it would be nice. c:
I liked how she clicked with Van again and hanging out as friends, and even tried to set him up on a date, and after they found out who was who, I was expecting them to make up right away since Wednesday had told him about her dreams of her who was him. I enjoyed the edning though, a happy ending, who wouldn't want that?
I give you three out of five stars for this. c:
Overall, huge bonus for the bike locks, and minus for not realizing who he was.
-Maria.