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  • Mat Devine

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    I really liked this. There's lots of emotion and detail. I'd like to see where this goes :D
    June 1st, 2010 at 10:11pm
  • pezzie

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    This is really good.
    Really deep with emotion.
    Good job!
    November 28th, 2009 at 03:42am
  • Hasta La Vista!!!

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    I love it.

    I"m subscribing :)
    June 24th, 2009 at 04:51am
  • Doctor

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    Oh my god.
    I am speechless as well as breathless.
    The emotion was so there, it was real.
    *subscribes*
    I swear to god, if you don't finish this...
    *slits throat with thumb*
    June 24th, 2009 at 04:48am
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