Give Me Novacaine - Comments

wow! thank you. :)

hey! my best friend's name is martena, too!

(: wow. i read almost the whole thing today and i've got about four chapters to go..

i read fast..

and jeez. you're good. i like this story and i'm gonna read the next one soon!

LOVE.
marty(:

I Love how the girl's name is alyssa!! well cuz that's my name.. and she reminds me of myself! my fav band is green day ^_^ and i love starbucks! (even though ive never gotten coffee from there, only the stuff u get from the store fridge )

dimitri_luv_jillian:

how come they can't act like a married couple? everyone acts as if it's a crime to hold hands and have sex, but they're married.

This is just a story filled with revenge and just inside jokes on my friends and stuff. Half of it probably doesn't make sence. But I had fun writing it.

how come they can't act like a married couple? everyone acts as if it's a crime to hold hands and have sex, but they're married.

I'M WORKING ON A SEQUEL!!

People Can Still Comment This If They Want To.
I'd Like To Get A Lot Of Comments, : )

I CAN'T THINK OF A NAME FOR THE SEQUEL.

Please Read My Journal About It.
Suggestions? Comment The Journal.

Thanks For Reading! I Had So Much Fun Writting It!

[[Cough]] Funny Stories, Eh?

You Take Ciera Out Because You're Mad At Her,

I Put Randi In Because I'm Mad At Her.

BATMANdent!:

WHOA WHOA WHOA WHOA ADIE.

You're Pregnant And Having Sex?

What The Fuckkkk?

Lmfao.

WORLD OF WARCRAFT IS FOR COMPUTER!

Goodness, Love, If You're Gonna Do It, Do It Righttt.

; )

THEY CAN'T CONTROL THEMSELVES.
Lmfaooooo. :lmfao

BATMANdent!:

WHOA WHOA WHOA WHOA ADIE.

You're Pregnant And Having Sex?

What The Fuckkkk?

Lmfao.

WORLD OF WARCRAFT IS FOR COMPUTER!

Goodness, Love, If You're Gonna Do It, Do It Righttt.

; )

Lmfaooooo. Come On Alice. : )
You Know How I Am. I'm Crazy.
I Have A Wild Imagination. xD

I Don't Give A Flying Fuck If W.O.W
Is For Computer Or Not. x )
In My World, It's For XBOX 3-effing-60.

I Love You!! : )

WHOA WHOA WHOA WHOA ADIE.

You're Pregnant And Having Sex?

What The Fuckkkk?

Lmfao.

WORLD OF WARCRAFT IS FOR COMPUTER!

Goodness, Love, If You're Gonna Do It, Do It Righttt.

; )

I'm so bored.
and you need to update.
or I'll hang you on my wall BEFORE you're old and shirveled.

bravo! bravo!

very nicee

little baby Alice.

= ]

oh yes,
you will start another chapter soon.

= ]

that one was great.

hahaha.
I had to add that laugh.
sorry.
I'm done now.

bwahahaha.

Carrots and Cookies?
haha.
I had to laugh, then got yelled at by Bo.

and the ending...
wow.

and a week or two...
and Tre is dressing up like Benji Madden?

oh, dear...

what a parent.

WHYSOSERIOUS?:

"Marty laughed at the sight of Tre'Cool in a tux.:

Thanks for that.

HURRY UP AND GET BACK FROM BAND CAMP ADIE!

Bwahahahahaha.

"Marty laughed at the sight of Tre'Cool in a tux.:

Thanks for that.

HURRY UP AND GET BACK FROM BAND CAMP ADIE!

Imaginary Grace:

I read a couple chapters and I don't mean to sound redundant or anything, but you really did skip a lot of things.
I mean, I think your story has potential, and I'm not trying to sound harsh, but I think it would be a lot better if the storyline went slower, and you gave more detail about the characters, and the setting.

PM me when you have more ok?

okay. i'll work on that :) thanks. :mrgreen:

Stupidd Scene Kidd.:

wow these people are just a bit horny! LOL

lmfaoooo xD hahahaha. :lmfao

Stupidd Scene Kidd.:

wow these people are just a bit horny! LOL

lmfaoooo xD hahahaha. :lmfao