May 31st, 2010 at 10:03am
(: wow. i read almost the whole thing today and i've got about four chapters to go..
i read fast..
and jeez. you're good. i like this story and i'm gonna read the next one soon!
LOVE.
marty(:
This is just a story filled with revenge and just inside jokes on my friends and stuff. Half of it probably doesn't make sence. But I had fun writing it.
- dimitri_luv_jillian:
- how come they can't act like a married couple? everyone acts as if it's a crime to hold hands and have sex, but they're married.
THEY CAN'T CONTROL THEMSELVES.
- BATMANdent!:
- WHOA WHOA WHOA WHOA ADIE.
You're Pregnant And Having Sex?
What The Fuckkkk?
Lmfao.
WORLD OF WARCRAFT IS FOR COMPUTER!
Goodness, Love, If You're Gonna Do It, Do It Righttt.
; )
Lmfaooooo. Come On Alice. : )
- BATMANdent!:
- WHOA WHOA WHOA WHOA ADIE.
You're Pregnant And Having Sex?
What The Fuckkkk?
Lmfao.
WORLD OF WARCRAFT IS FOR COMPUTER!
Goodness, Love, If You're Gonna Do It, Do It Righttt.
; )
Bwahahahahaha.
- WHYSOSERIOUS?:
- "Marty laughed at the sight of Tre'Cool in a tux.:
Thanks for that.
HURRY UP AND GET BACK FROM BAND CAMP ADIE!
okay. i'll work on that :) thanks. :mrgreen:
- Imaginary Grace:
- I read a couple chapters and I don't mean to sound redundant or anything, but you really did skip a lot of things.
I mean, I think your story has potential, and I'm not trying to sound harsh, but I think it would be a lot better if the storyline went slower, and you gave more detail about the characters, and the setting.
PM me when you have more ok?
lmfaoooo xD hahahaha. :lmfao
- Stupidd Scene Kidd.:
- wow these people are just a bit horny! LOL
lmfaoooo xD hahahaha. :lmfao
- Stupidd Scene Kidd.:
- wow these people are just a bit horny! LOL
hey! my best friend's name is martena, too!