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  • Jesss!

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    I like this. Hopefully you'll update. :D
    March 19th, 2010 at 02:18am
  • AngelOfBlood

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    I like that its starting to get into the story now. I hope the next updat doesn't take too long!
    The Vampire should sooooooo win
    August 11th, 2009 at 02:05pm
  • FlowrPowr

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    There were a few parts where it felt a little choppy, but other than that, this is an excellent start. Can't wait for the next one!
    July 9th, 2009 at 05:51pm
  • AngelOfBlood

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    I liked the new chapter better. It looked like you actually took your time on this one.
    Sync sounds like an awesome guy ^+^ WITH GREEN HAIR!!! that rocks
    July 8th, 2009 at 08:37pm
  • Angel4Eva16

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    this...is...odd. but somehow, I love it. It's interesting and very original. Update!

    Olivia
    July 8th, 2009 at 02:15am
  • Calligraphy

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    geez I haven't even read the first chapter yet and I love it! lol, anyway, it's kind of weird cuz I'm writing an assasin story too... Before I knew you were. How strange.
    July 7th, 2009 at 07:37pm
  • FlowrPowr

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    That is a pretty original idea... an assassin and a vampire... will there be any romancing in the story? I'd like to see that. I'll be waiting for your next update. Write on!
    July 2nd, 2009 at 08:18pm
  • AngelOfBlood

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    I like the idea I feel that the opening sentence could be re-thought. i didn't think it made any sense. Interesting though. I like Assasins and am Vampire OBSESSED so i'm gonna read on ^_^
    June 28th, 2009 at 09:00pm
  • poison ivy

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    nice combo of the whole vamp/assasin thing goin on
    its writen really well
    June 27th, 2009 at 11:40pm
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