(Im)Mature - Comments

I have to say I really wish this was finished you are very talented and I do so hope you decide to continue with this.

please update again soon, this is so good

All I can say is that your stories make me smile and your an amazing writer, I've read a lot of stuff and you you just have the ability to make me blush with your stories:) please continue the bam story, you are really one of a kind!!

wow great story. really love your writing style, you make everything seem so real. good job. :)
oh, and keep up the good work ;)

So I recently found your corner of Mibba and I really like your stories. This one is probably my favorite though. I love it! So I am guilty of thinking Vanessa pregnant but then... cancer! o.o Oh my gosh! That's so awful! I really hope she can pull through it but ovarian cancer is supposed to be really tough. I can't wait for the next chapter! Wonderful job :)

Please don't make her die or go bald :(

Hope u update soon!!!

I would have rathered she'd been pregnant :P oh, well, loving the twist. Left my mouth open, haha!

I kind of wondered if she had some sort of disease, but I wasn't expecting ovarian cancer! No one ever uses that particular cancer, because most people know so little about it. My grandmother had a particularly bad case, with two tumors (one per ovary). One was the size of a softball, the other the size of a vollyball! They went unnoticed because she was already somewhat overweight, and because her doctor was, apparently, an idiot. Her new doctor (when the old one retired) noticed it during a routine physical exam. She had to have surgery immediately, and a lot of chemo, but she's now 6.5 years cancer-free. She got lucky since most people don't survive this cancer, which has me worried for your character! =( I'm looking forward to seeing how you write this! And thank you for writing it at all, because even something as simple as an online story (even if it's not so simple to actually write, I think you get my point) gets the word out, and the more people who know about it, the more people there are who could be saved by early detection. And, of course, the fact that this is an awesome story (I'm really enjoying it) means that even more people are reading it! =) Keep writing and we'll keep reading!

*dies a little inside* not cancer! Cancer is evil!! :(
Update soon??

Well, THAT was unexpected! I like it. it makes this story different from all the other "carbon copy stories" on here,

this is really great so far! cant wait for more of this!

and here i thought she was prego. aw shucks hope she gets better soon

Hapy Birthday! (most likely late now :L)
Update soon please! xxx

Happy bday!!! Update soon?? <3

oh man! D: update soon :)
cliff hangers...

Happy Birthday to youu!
Please Please Please update soon!
Hope this was some sort of motivation.hah.:)

plz udpate soon!!!! i luv it!

Reallylove this story so far and i seriously can't wait for more!!!

Kassandra

its a really good story i wanna keep reading more its totally worth it to finish it