Vogue - Comments

Something is about to happen, I can sense it (:
I totally can not wait for the next update
John needs to make a move...soon xD haha
I love this (:
xo

I really love the way you write :]

And they were super adorable :] So was Greico

Just read through all of this. Quite lovely, wonderful details.
And damn that sexy Gaskarth...

Hahaha, having a penis drawn on Alex's face. Hmm. Something tells me that's happened many times in real life while he was inebriated. Hahaha. (;

Loved the updates, can't wait to read more! (:

I really wanted to comment the updates, but I went on vacation, so I had no internet. But I'm just gonna comment real quick to say I'm going to read them now, and then comment. Which might take awhile since my internet connection is being really slow. But I'm determined to comment! Hahaha. (:

i can't be swayed any way if the story's about the two boys i would most definitely take my clothes off for. also, i can't decide whether you or arabella's brain is a bigger tease.

Nope, I'm not swayed. Haha.
Just because they were drunk and he kissed her (and who knows what else, Arabella can't even remember the rest of the night, yet another sign that she was wayyy too drunk and Alex was too and that's just a bad combination). 'Cause, y'know, Johnny-boy, if he was in the position, other than him probably freaking out because 'OH MY GOD SHE'S DRUNK AND I'M DRUNK AND I LOVE HER', I'm not so sure he would make the move. Because, like you said, John's pretty level-headed and thinks things through...so he wouldn't want to mack on the girl of his dreams when they're both drunk and won't exactly remember what they're doing the next morning.
But I liked this one. You got to see the side of Alex and Arabella's relationship that you don't normally see. And yeah, the kid's nice and they're cute and blah blah blah. I have nothing against Gaskarth.
But I'm still rooting for John (:
Can't wait for the next update!

As much as I am in love with Mr.O'Callaghan and his suavey and shy subtle hints towards Arabella, and their adorable relationship (So far, boy needs to make a huge move on her soon ;] ahaha), I am adoring the way you presented Gaskarth in this last chapter. Arabella's relationship with him is very exciting to read haha, I love the energy that passes between them, it's ingenious. I had to bust out laughing at the penis she drew on his face, and the whole dialogue there, brilliant!
I am stoked for the next chapter, it's going to be amazing ;]
xo

Eeek, alcohol is very bad!!

YOU TEASE! YOU CLIFFHANGER-LOVER! YOU IM-NOT-GONNA-LET-YOU-SLEEP-TONIGHT AUTHOR!!!!
askldhgakjhg;alihg!!!!!

you just CANT leave it there! its law! somewhere im sure it says Cosabella is not alloud to leave her readers hanging.

go look it up!

and yes i have chosen a side and will defend my side with all my rad Mibba Powers.

update soon^^
-joy

I'm very much a John Fan!

i just started reading this and i really am enjoying it
+ you're a really great writer too C=
keep it up lovely <3

NO! What about John?! He and Bella should get together, not Alex!

somehow stupid mibba didn't send me that you updated :/
but the updates were amazing and brilliant.
I love the chemistry between Arabella and Alex (:
I am also loving the relationship between John and her, more than Alex and her haha. I hope there are more updates, your writing is PERFECT!
xo

Amazing. Simply amazing.

You're writing style is so perfect.

Keep writing.

Yes Nothing Personal is great.

I like how John took the pictures of her that she would actually call stunning :]
Super cute.

And yes! I love Nothing Personal, but since I listened, I'm going on an ATL fast. No ATL until July 7th. It's not working out xD

So, I'm not gonna lie.
I wanted her to get buzzed and harass John into admitting that he loves her.
Or, y'know, since that's a bit excessive, maybe just admit that he thinks she's the bee's knees and that he wants to have her children or something equally ridiculous but still soooooo true.
And I think it's adorable in an almost sketch sort of way that he takes pictures of her and she thinks they're pretty. I like that she's beginning to see different sides of him, even if it's making her a total spazz because of it.
But then you threw in that Alex curveball and ...I don't even know now.
I'm hoping she isn't going to do something she regrets. Because she seems pretty naive and if they're both buzzed or drunk or who knows what, god knows what will go down.
I can't wait for the next one (:

I love your story!
please upedate ASAP!
i love your character of Bella, it is astounding how complex you menaged to create her!
John-o better get her soon!

-joy

ugh this is just perfect perfect perfect. your writing is absolutely astonishing and ugggh, i'm out of words. i never was good with them anyway ♥♥

I love it. The way you write, with such detail, it's like I'm watching a movie or something. Hahaha.

And the way you write John, Jack, Alex, ect. Is EXACTLY how I picture them being in real life. I can't wait for the update, it's gonna be great. (: