I'm sorry, I know that he needs a sensitive side and all; but I don't like it. I'd much rather he at least got angry before he breaks down. He's a man, so he needs to act like one! XxX
I love this. The chapters, although very definite, seem to be able to weave into whatever shape you craft them into. I'm guessing this is because you write the chapters completely seperately, rather than writing a story and splitting it after. It's a good quality to have. On a completely unrelated subject, *Rose*Loves*Draco* (and has since she was 7)
very good i think. I liked the back ground most as it was very well laid out. The story is clever and well thought out.. I liked the last thing draco said... about not deserving love ...
Anyway... i wonder where you're going to go with this?