Break Out - Comments

cute ending

That was a cute ending. I'm definitely sure that I'll keep re-reading it. :)

wow,this story was so good,although it was short,still wonderful!

wow,sorry to see it coming to an end but it was really good,can't wait to see how the last one goes!

I was freaking out. Thank God they didn't get caught, like Fallin_For_You said.

Sad that it's coming to an end. :( Will there be a sequel?

glad they didnt get caught...

It was indeed a cute chapter.

Rest in peace, Jimmy. He'll never be forgotten, and he'll always be loved.

cute update

RIP Jimmy :(

Silly Brian... Gonna update again soon hun? Please? :) This story is cool and I'd like to see more.

lol great chapter

I'm really in the mood to go camping now. I think it's pretty cool that you've got the whole no electricty and running water thing going on. It seems in other similar stories people always forget about the small things. Even if in real life they're what matter the most. Like as if someone can just secretly move into a house and expect their to be water and electricity... =]

Looking forward to more!

love the new chapter! keep it up!

great update!

I seriously thought I commented on this when I read the first chapter. =[ Sorry.

I really like this. It's unique :XD More soon?

Hmm seems as though people aren't commenting again..well anyway it was a good chapter, keep it up!(:

loved the update
cant wait to see how things go for them!

Damn, well i wanted to be the first comment but oh well. Anyway the story is really good!

This is good so far!