Devil's Work - Comments

-is a new reader-
Wow
I love this story now... it's a really unique thing. I've never seen a story from a baby's point of view... it was really something.
It took me about ten minutes to read the story so far, even when my computer froze.

Amazing update
This story just gets better and better!
I'm about to whore your story out over Twitter
I will do this every day up until I go on holiday.
Then I shall start again when I get back :file:

Kaitlynn's so flipping cute.
I love this so much!
And I'd be happy to whore your story.
If by "PM" you meant Private Message I'll dot hat right now.
But one more thing! I thought MCR day was APRIL 23rd?
D;
If not I've been celebrating the wrong day.
I suck.

MY GOD That was brilliant. Who is Gee calling? I can't wait for more!

Stupid Police!
update soon pleasse!

Good story ^.^
I totally agree about the Harry Potter thing. The movie was much better then people give it credit for. More Bellatrix.. and Harry was like... High when he took the luck potion! ^.^

poor frank
update soon please!!

Amazing update
I'm worried for Kaitlynn
I want to know why those men want to get at her
she's a cute, innocent baby, right?

The harry potter thing, 'parently they left heaps of shit out, improtant shit.

And that was a lovely-but short- uodate!

it just gets better and better

I usually never ever read frerards but
this is a good story
:D

I love the story!!

Oh my...Gerard is scared. And if Gerard is scared that means I'm scared. And I'm not even part of this fictional world you're writing! GAH! Hehe. I loved it. And we couldn't possibly hate you.

And perhaps the reason behind people disliking the sixth Harry Potter film--that I have yet to see D;--is because they're attached to the "new and improved" Twilight and wanted something more like that. That's what I think.

Anyway. Great update. Short, but great!
Update soon!!
xoxox

New reader..thinks it's compliment time! Forst of all, I'd like to say that I absolutely love Kaitlynn. She insanely adorable! I'm not over it, nope! Hehe. And I love how Gerard is all protective while Frankie is weak. I--personally--would have written it the other way around, but you just make Frank so much more adorable! Damn, I didn't want to use the word 'adorable' again. >.> Oh well. And I cannot think of a theory for who the people from the Agency might be. I don't know. I think it might have something to do with someone being homophobic and having a promblem with Frerard parenting this baby. I don't know, honestly. Another awesome feature of this story is how Kaitlynn can actually be telling her own flipping story! That is so randomly genius! Hah! I love it <3
Again, this sis awesome and insanely well written. dammit, I used the word 'insanely' twice in this comment. Well! I can't wait for an update.
Great job!
xoxoxo

This story just keeps getting more and more intresting
I really can't wait to find out who's wanting her off of them
I love how you write the story
It's great because I've never read a story told in the child's point of veiw before

This story is really great! I love it soo much <3 I've never read anything like it. It's cute, and sweet, and scary, and emotional all at the same time. And it's not all about Gerard and Frank fucking eachother :]

I love this story! You're doing such an awesome job with it! It's so captivating!!! I can't wait for the next update! I always look forward to getting e-mails about this!! =D

Its aliens! No, I don't really know who's after Kaitlyn. But I look forward to reading who is. Update wicked soon!

So, there are a few possible options that I have in my head. This is using the excuse you haven't actually muttered a word of Kaitlynn's real father. I think maybe the father heard that his daughter was given to gays. Perhaps he is a homophobe, and has sent detectives out to retrieve his little girl.
Or maybe it's the government. Black cars, real official sounding men. It could work. Don't know why exactly but it could. Maybe...I don't know. But that was the first thing I thought when I saw the picture and the words "Shiny black car".
OR (my personal favourite) she is the devils child. The devil is maybe testing them, to see if they truely are fit fathers for his daughter?

What ever. Either way, right or wrong, it's an amazing story, an amazing plot, and that was one bloody brilliant update

Poor Frankie.

I'd be freaking out too!