December 13th, 2009 at 06:15pm
Intense, man. Intense.
God, I do so hate it when people get my name wrong. Fudge. D:
Pink dragon, ftw! xD I'm surprised it didn't try to grab Dom and his fluorescent pants in it's pink claws.
....Or did it?
One thing you may want to consider is using less capital sentences to represent shouting. A few is fine, but it's better if you use exclamation marks instead - that is, after all, what they're for :]
Anyways, I shall subscribe, and am awaiting an update. Did I mention I love this story? 'Cause I do 8)