:shock:. I'm scared. I loved this story. I like how it goes back and forth. I didn't get that at first, but I did in the end. I love how you made the twist at the end of how he was so intent on getting ehr to lose, but in the end she still won. That realization must have sucked. I think it was kind of evil in a way for the guard to have even said that. Very Very Nicely Done! :)
I loved this story. I like how it goes back and forth. I didn't get that at first, but I did in the end. I love how you made the twist at the end of how he was so intent on getting ehr to lose, but in the end she still won. That realization must have sucked. I think it was kind of evil in a way for the guard to have even said that.
Very Very Nicely Done! :)