Jonny Elle (Journal) - Comments

Yeahh, I know, I meant for their to be a lot more put into it... but their was certain amount of words for the contest, blah blah, you know.
But thank you, a lot. (:

This was really sad :( Although, I think that you could have incorporated more emotion in it.. Because when you talked about her dad raping her, you could have said a lot more about the whole situation.

Nonetheless, it was really good.

And I also liked the last entry where she writes Jonny again.

More Original:

I know, I know. I am a little late telling everyone the results but I have to say that you have won third place in the contest. Congrats!

AHHHH!!!! Thank you so much!!! That was my first contest story, I can't believe it!!! :D

I know, I know. I am a little late telling everyone the results but I have to say that you have won third place in the contest. Congrats!

Skids:

Amazing. Just, simply amazing. :D

I liked every part of this except when her father raped her. EWW. But I was glad that he was sent to jail!

I think the ending was my favorite. The last journal entry to Jonny. I am glad she is happy. :)

Wow, really? Thanks so much!!! I worked on this for about 5 hours, and then I came back and went over it again, like, 20 times. I was worried it wasn't good.

I really appreciate it! :)

Amazing. Just, simply amazing. :D

I liked every part of this except when her father raped her. EWW. But I was glad that he was sent to jail!

I think the ending was my favorite. The last journal entry to Jonny. I am glad she is happy. :)