Tripping Eyes and Flooded Lungs - Comments

YOU PUT SOME FRERARD IN HERE<3333 that makes me so happy lmao

That's it? no! ot feels so unfinished! It's not supposed to end like that lol. Oh well least they promised each other

I loved this story so much <3 please write the sequel soon :)

Please don't let Brendon or Ryan be with anyone else

I love this so much <3 please update soon :)

It did not suck! It was a perfect little scene :-)

I have a feeling I know what the bad thing is going to be. But on a good note, yay! updates

I love this <3 please update soon :)

Good, Ryan's dad doesn't know :3

Still waiting to see the bad thing that's gonna happen

Love it <3 please update soon :)

Brendon's gonna be at Ryan's place and Ryan's gonna admit his love but then his dads gonna walk in and spazz... :( maybe? Please don't kill anyone

I love this <3 please update soon :)

He's gonna break up with her, isn't he

Hi! okay, so, i only found this story today and was in love with it at chapter 1, so, for the last 4 hours i have done nothing but read through chapters 1-81 with no breaks except one to pee. so yeah, i got to chap 81 and was like holy shit this update was 11 months after the last! damn girl u better not make me wait that long for more lol :p
wicked story, can't wait 4 more :D

I fucking love this story <3 please update again soon :D

I love this so much <3 <3 <3
You should definitely continue soon :)

I just started reading this story and hour ago and I've made it to chapter 43...
So, I'm kind of disappointed in Ryan and Brendon's relationship...I mean, it took them 41 unnecessary chapters to finally kiss. A lot of the past chapters were filled with nonsense that didn't really belong. Many grammatical and vocab errors. And you'd skip from scene to scene without any warning, like, but in stars in between "scenes". The story seemed kind of sloppy and quickly thrown together. No character development between the characters. I don't have any kind of emotion for any of them. I think you could of done way better.

BUT ON THE OTHER HAND.

Damn, this story made me laugh.

My favorite scene was the Wal*Mart scene when Spencer, Ryan, and that other girl role played and yeah, haha that was really funny.

I mean, over all this story wasn't BAD, but it lacked a lot and I think for future reference, you should take some criticism. I mean, criticism is great, without it we don't improve. And from what I've read you need to improve a lot. I don't think I'll continue reading due to the fact of lack of time. But I'll trust that you take my review and put it to good use<3

~Puresa Poison XoXo <3

omg update now ok.

Lol I did anyway cos I love Brendon ok.
And uh.. :3
Guess nigga has a boyfriend so it's okay.
anywhooo..
awksauce.

Babe, I was honestly really fucking enjoying this.
Then god damn Frank came in.
I hate mcr.
If I wanted a mcr slash.
I would have searched that.
I'm having a hard time wanting to continue.
-Madi xo.

the ending was super cute :D keep on writing i stay waiting for this story:)

Yay! Cuteness

And btw the person above me has an AWESOME username

Big fan, big fan c: update soon!

U SHOULD NEVER TAKE THAT LONG TO UPDATE!
And now for your question:
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