Admiration - Comments

volta. (1000)

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I think this is an absolutely wonderful piece. I like that you use pieces of the lyrics to paint the scene of dialogue and description for what's to come. I just think it's lovely. :) Your description, as well, is just great to read. You don't use over-flowery language, but a beautiful poeticness that just compliments the lyrics, the song and ldkfjsld. :) I also liked how the sex scene was particularly classy. You didn't actually say they were having sex or that this and that was happening, but you used poetic devices (as such) to create the scene. I just think that this was beautifully written, you didn't take away from the lyrics - distort their meanings, but you used them wonderfully. :) Great read. And write. :)

August 4th, 2011 at 11:46pm

locust (100)

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Um, hello, and you call ME a great writer?! You are magnificent! I truly loved this; every sentence seemed to become a mirage of how beautiful love and admiration truly can be.

July 27th, 2009 at 08:05am