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  • stallion ducky;

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    I think you should update this story.
    Right now, because it's just so great. <3
    It's got the perfect writing style. I really enjoy reading your stuff.
    October 8th, 2009 at 01:57am
  • stallion ducky;

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    I'm still diggin' this story. (:
    It's so freaking sad. I almost cried when I read this one.
    Maybe I'm a little over-emotional. But I don't care!
    What really matters, is you updating this PRONTO.
    <3
    October 1st, 2009 at 09:49pm
  • girl almighty.

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    Except for some reason when I comment it says it's the 30th when it's the 29th here...
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    September 30th, 2009 at 05:04am
  • girl almighty.

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    When you update, I pay close attention to the chapter titles and automatically start singing after I read the line. Save your scissors, ugh, what a good song - what a good chapter. My heart gave a wrench at the thought of the whole band deceased and the fact that Dallas is back where he started. He sings a song, on BMYL, called constant knot and the lyrics remind me a lot of the chapter.


    How do I end up this way? A constant knot in my gut, tied with uncertainty and with lust.
    A classic case I suppose. A haunted man who can't out run his ghosts, they're in my skin
    and my bones
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    PS.

    IT'S HIS 29TH BIRTHDAY TODAY!
    September 30th, 2009 at 05:01am
  • whatwouldyoudoif...

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    Frequent updates make me excited!
    And even if you think it's the worst chapter so far I still like it. I love your writing style, I can definitely tell that it's fun to write. It's choppy yet organised all at once, it's really cool, I have a lot of fun just reading it. And your welcome for the comment, it's the least I can do, I'd bet my life it takes you a lot longer to write a chapter than it does me to write a comment. I eagerly await your next update (:
    September 30th, 2009 at 04:44am
  • whatwouldyoudoif...

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    I'm in love with the way you write this story. It's just so... I don't even know what, it just is and I love it for that.
    The way that you have Dallas observe everything is just so interesting and unique, I don't think I've ever found anything quite like it before.
    I'm having trouble coming up with a comment that doesn't say "I love it" or describe things as "really really good" but I'm bad at it, so bare with me.
    This is one of the stories that I look forward to updates the most because, well, I love it and it's really really good. But I think you could have already guessed that I was going to say that.
    I'd also like to just kind of randomly throw out there that Dallas Green is pretty well my musical idol because he's so simple yet complex all at once, and I think you've captured that so well in your portrayal of him. So congratulations on that because I'm pretty sure that a story like this would be really easy for a lot of people to mess up but, again, you're doing a really really good job.
    September 28th, 2009 at 08:09am
  • girl almighty.

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    Nu huh. DEFINITELY not garbage! You're brilliant at being Dallas, or rather, his thoughts.
    I'm sure we could spend a few hours digging around in that brain of his! Maybe days or weeks.
    However. Still love this and still want updates please! And thanks a bunch for creating such
    a piece of work that includes my favorite person in the world.
    September 28th, 2009 at 05:43am
  • productionandstyle

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    OMG! Are you serious?
    THANK YOU SO MUCH!
    September 28th, 2009 at 12:58am
  • stallion ducky;

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    I am officially a Dallas lover.
    And that is only because of how beautifully you play his role.(:
    Update this soon, I'm subscribing. And I'll continue to comment until you update!
    September 28th, 2009 at 12:56am
  • stallion ducky;

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    That was a great chapter. You used my favorite word: Flabbergasted.
    And your description was superb. You're so amazing, you should be my master.(:
    September 28th, 2009 at 12:38am
  • stallion ducky;

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    And oh, my God.
    Annie, you are simply amazing at writing.
    'Nuff said.
    September 28th, 2009 at 12:10am
  • stallion ducky;

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    All I could do was watch as everything fell apart.

    I rather liked how you ended it like that.
    I thought it was clever. (:
    I don't even know how Dallas Green is, and I don't care. I like this story a whole bunch. And I'm not sure why nobody read it. Just because it isn't My Chemical Romance or Avenged Sevenfold doesn't mean you can't read a story.
    Because let me tell you, this is a niiiiiiiiice story.<3
    September 27th, 2009 at 11:41pm
  • ritzah

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    i love it!
    so very very good.
    August 12th, 2009 at 03:06am
  • whatwouldyoudoif...

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    I love it so far! The world needs more Dallas Green fans, he's amazing.
    August 10th, 2009 at 06:05am
  • gatorface

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    Bless your soul, Dallas Green is a masterpiece.
    July 21st, 2009 at 06:17pm
  • girl almighty.

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    “I didn’t really know what to call it when I got it,” I tell her, “so I just call it ‘Cat.’”
    My favorite part by far! I giggled and grinned. Seems just like Dallas
    to call a cat, cat. Hehehe :cute: more? Please!
    July 19th, 2009 at 11:44pm
  • Kevin Jonas

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    Finally! A Dallas Green story! : D
    I absolutely love this, so far. : )
    I can't wait to see what happens!
    July 19th, 2009 at 08:54pm
  • girl almighty.

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    I'm a huge asshole. I forgot to comment after I read it, last week.
    LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE IT!
    I'd really like to see where this goes :)
    July 13th, 2009 at 04:44am
  • Dick Grayson

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    This is good so far ^-^
    It’s nice to see someone else who likes Dallas! I was starting to think I was the only one… well other then his wife XD
    July 6th, 2009 at 04:51am