And Like a Summer Nearly Over - Comments

Wow, this is a really good one shot. I'm off to college soon and I can completely understand it. It's how I feel about my love, my lovely. It's really really really good and well written. I loveses it hardcore.

thats so realistic, and so true, damn why does nobody else write like this on mibba!!
much luff :D
x

I always just stare in awe at my computer screen when I read your stuff. I love the metaphors you use. I love how you don't just use them and make them sound slightly out of place and a little forced, you make them really let the reader experience what the character is feeling. A lot of times, I don't really like reading mealoncholy one-shots (or stories). But yours are just so beautiful. It's the same way that I love reading Catcher in the Rye.

Beautiful.
Very well written.
I feel the need to give you a review and comment.

Just the memory makes me smile, even as I feel the tears start to boil over. I told myself that I would not get attached that night. I told myself that you and me, well, we were just going to be something to look fondly back on. I told myself that when you left, it wouldn’t ache. I told myself all this and I wonder if you had to tell yourself all that too.

The way you described the fact on how they missed them was perfect.
I loved how you gave your reasoning without being "corny"
I'd loved to see more of this.
Great Job

beautifully written

i liked it, bittersweet though it was. i just wished it was abit longer.

Thats really good!!!
*subscribes*

<3
Thanks guys.

wow. that was really, really great.
even for a one-shot i really felt it; what the girl was feeling. grammar was perfect, spelling was perfect, setence fluency and voice were perfect; everything was perfect.

brilliant

Awww. That's sad. But I really like it.
You're a great writer.