Drown Me, Lovely - Comments

Wow this was a great one shot. Juliana sounds like a very sexy woman. XD And somewhat of a tease. Anyway. The descriptions were absolutely vivid. The story grew beautifully and then those last words were uttered. It gave me absolute goosebumps.

The woman pulled the cigarette out from between her lips and blew out a huge puff of white smoke. She waved her hand in the air, pushing the smoke away and coughing slightly.

I loved that. It was short, but yet, so vivid and descriptive.

Good job. :D

I totally forgot how epic this story is. You should write more.

Breezy;:

*makes orgasming sound*

I like this. I like this a lot.

Haha, thanks so much!

*makes orgasming sound*

I like this. I like this a lot.