You're a Mafia Princess...What Would You Do? - Comments

Well done!

I loved how you made her a heartless kind of girl instead of the normal, always for love crap other people do.

I also liked how you switched your lyric around in the end nice job.

I liked how she put of this innocence act when she was anything but.

I als thought the fact that she still had a heart even though she was kinda cold was well written.

Great job, well done!