I must say, the begging for comments at the end of every chapter was getting insulting... "Silent readers suck" "u guys faillll" etc etc etc.. Have you heard the saying "if you've got nothing nice to say then say nothing at all"? Maybe thats why you weren't getting lots of comments?
Anyhow since you desperately wanted comments.. I'll give u one... when writing about an american band, and creating a backing cast of american characters, you should look into american slang. Your entire story was based on british slang, and I understand that that is your dialect which is fine, however for the sake of the story and the fact that Juliana is a childhood friend of the jonas family it would be a requirement to use the american dialect in your writing. Otherwise, you would have had to rewrite the story to explain WHY it is Juliana (an american) is constantly speaking like a Brit...maybe she spent some time overseas studying? I dunno.
The fact of the matter is, american's do not refer to one another as chicken, nor they refer to "getting picked up" as "pulled." In the future, when writing you may want to look into that.
Furthermore, the relationship and friendship with Beyonce and JayZ is highly unbelievable. This is due to the fact that there is a 10 year age gap between Beyonce and Juliana, as well as the fact that the two run in completely different music circles. While they could have had a chance meeting at the lakers game, I find it doubtful that Beyonce would hand her number over to a Disney stars girlfriend... just like that... especially considering the disney star's girlfriend came off sounding like a teenybopper fan. I realize that in the story you mentioned that Juliana had a youtube channel and it was watched however you did not portray her as a Youtube sensation, an internet celebrity in her own right, thus Beyonce having watched her is a little bit far fetched; therefore that side storyline needs plenty of improvement and development to be more believable.
However I did enjoy your outfit choices. If the writing thing fails, look into styling.
OH MY GOD! I cannot believe that. Holy moly. What the hell. Seriously that was an amazing ending! I love Emma and Nick together, but far out Joe I wanna hit him now! AMAZING! :)
Joe is seriously unbelievable. I can't believe he would do that to Julia. I suggest Julia write a song about him, too. kidding. but I'm glad you decided to make a sequel. I wish you all the best in school. don't let anyone annoy you with constant begging for updates. you're gonna have so much fun at your Jonas concert(:
Oh my gosh! I want to know who he cheated on her with. Hopefully we'll figure that out in the sequel...yes? haha. It actually brought tears to my eyes. This story was absolutely amazing.
THE NEXT CHAPTER CANNOT BE THE LAST!!!!!! NOOO. I'm gonna be really sad when this ends. This is a total epic story and I love it so much! Gah I cannot wait till the last chapter, but I can, cause I dont want it to end jsut yet. Lol, anyways, this was not an epic fail. Well done.
Awwww. That chapter didn't suck. I wanted to know what Miley was going to show her though. I'm sad this story is coming to an end. It's one of my favorites ever on mibba. I didn't read that thing on oceanup but I'm about to right now. I don't see them doing that :( Can't wait for the last chapter.