Nazareth - Comments

That was really beautiful :D A+

holy shit, that was just ... wow. no words can describe it. they just cant...

holy shit, that was just ... wow. no words can describe it. they just cant...

I love your writing style. It blows my mind.
This one-shot was brilliant, I think my favorite part was when Brendon asked Ryan how he got in, and Ryan says the thing about the key under the plant. I don't know why I liked that part, it just seemed really...cute? Yeah.
Loooooved it :-]

My God, I think that was the most amazing thing I have ever read on Mibba. My heart broke at the realistic feeling of the whole thing. I felt like this had actually happened and you took the time to document the whole thing.
I applaud you on your skills, I wish I could do what you do.
Keep writing, I love your work <3
---JAzz

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG
this was so....amazing. it was emotional and intense and so well written.
i'm glad ryan remembered =)

VivianCupcake:

I'm back with my comments and conciderations. Ok, so YOU know that I'm not into gay pornz like you are. Or like other people are. But you know, it's not ABOUT that. You write MORE than that. A level that, like, I can't even explain. It's insense. Really, really intense. And it comes from somewhere that most people don't know. But you know, babe. I dunno, like, this story was different than anything you've ever done. You've grown so freaking much in writing. You capture things like a moment in time with your words. I feel like I actually see them. Ryan, Brendon, everyone. I can touch them, smell them, hurt with them, or laugh with them. That makes and breaks writers. And you, my friend, have made a mountain of amazing that can not be topped.

:arms:
I knew there was a reason I kept you around.

I'm back with my comments and conciderations. Ok, so YOU know that I'm not into gay pornz like you are. Or like other people are. But you know, it's not ABOUT that. You write MORE than that. A level that, like, I can't even explain. It's insense. Really, really intense. And it comes from somewhere that most people don't know. But you know, babe. I dunno, like, this story was different than anything you've ever done. You've grown so freaking much in writing. You capture things like a moment in time with your words. I feel like I actually see them. Ryan, Brendon, everyone. I can touch them, smell them, hurt with them, or laugh with them. That makes and breaks writers. And you, my friend, have made a mountain of amazing that can not be topped.

Wow, amazing!

BEGGIT!
I loved it!

... frick. I was blown away. Gimme a day or two and I'll comment again cause I'm speechless.

It made me cry at the middle parts and smile at the super sweet ending. WIth panic breaking up and that picture of ryan with the coke this was really sad to read. However, it's still the awesome greatness that you usually write.

Sorry it took so long to comment just found it today....

That was really good! Realistic and also heartbreaking.

It's pretty clear that you've spent a lot of time and effort on it:)

BEGGIT,
I WANNA HAVE THIS STORY'S BABIES LIEK FER SRS.
You have no idea how fucking talented you are!
I mean, sure, so much people out there have really nice stories, with all those big words, and drama and shit, but yours are
:cheese:
Holy Shit man, I can't even say!
It's just... too fucking intense!
I remember reading 900 Thousand Times I Would....
and I was so completely blown! (:tehe:)
You have got to be one of my favorite FBR story authors here on mibba!
:cheese: I'm still completely... D8

With that said... I'll move on to your story now. :tehe:

Duuudeee, if you haven't noticed already, I'm a big fan of angst fics. Especially when they're slash. :XD
And this was just WOAH EPIC.
And I love how you took the whole Ryan cheating on Keltie and twisted it around, making it seem even more dramatic than we'll ever know.
And when Bren mentioned about how it couldn't have been him that Ryan cheated with I was like
"Fuck, damn! That's right!" and I very nearly cried.
I felt for Bren. Not like I know what it feels like, but I just did.
The FRECKLES THE FRECKLES.
I thought they were so pointless at first but then...
THE LAST LINE
:cheese: :cheese:
Okay, I'm gonna stop now, I think I might have a heart attack.

But srsly, Beggit, I want this story's babies. :grr:

NAO.

Ily. :cute:

This right here - the whole feeling inside my chest and the feeling of tears on my cheeks - reminds me so much of the first time I read "I'll Never Be What You Need". My fingers are shaking as I'm typing this up, and I feel oddly elated.

In his world, it's always nine in the afternoon. That line alone says so much anent drug abuse (at least the way I see it, though I have no experience with this, so I could, of course, be mistaking.)

He feels everything, yet nothing but himself. Maybe now, he is everything and there is else nothing left. It makes so little sense, yet I seem to understand every word of it.

Whereas the previously mentioned phrases are prodigious, it was the third last sentence that rended my heart, before mysteriously mending it:

"Hey, your freckles are back," Ryan smiles, pecking Brendon's nose lightly and making his eyes flutter shut. :cheese: Because, honestly, you nailed it with that.

When I read the whole "freckles make me look like a kid" thing at first I thought "aw," and left it at that. But when that sentence above was read - you have no idea - I grinned and wept like a maniac.

It was the perfect - if there is ever something like that - ending, and this, dear Tessa, is by far your best work. <3

I think I just had a mini heart attack. I loved this. Very well written.

eye-year-oh:

O My God.
This was so wonderful, heartbreaking, realistic and sad I cried to the very end.
It truly was marvelous....
You're a great writer, really, I'll go and check out the rest of your stories later, huh? What do you think??:)
xox. emily
PS. I am honoured to steal your comment virginity on that^^

I think that's very good. I am pleased that you took it from me. xD

O My God.
This was so wonderful, heartbreaking, realistic and sad I cried to the very end.
It truly was marvelous....
You're a great writer, really, I'll go and check out the rest of your stories later, huh? What do you think??:)
xox. emily
PS. I am honoured to steal your comment virginity on that^^