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  • TattooLady

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    Freakazoid!:
    I really don't get why I'm the only one commenting this. IT'S AMAZING!!!
    And you're more than welcome. :D
    I was wondering when the living statue job she had was gonna come up. And Brian's coming? SQUEEE!!!!
    Oh, and I've worked out why I love your style. It's a bit like reading an autobiography- which is a style you don't see on Mibba and it's refreshing to read. ^^
    And you can bet that I'll keep reading, just as long as you keep writing!!
    Yes, right now I'm trying to give readers a background story so they can get a good mental image of Amanda. Ya know, just in case they're not too keen on the Dolls. That's why I'm telling it in a autobiographical point of view. But soon there will be much more dialouge. Especially when Brian comes into the story. :)
    July 7th, 2009 at 12:52am
  • Freaka.

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    I really don't get why I'm the only one commenting this. IT'S AMAZING!!!
    And you're more than welcome. :D
    I was wondering when the living statue job she had was gonna come up. And Brian's coming? SQUEEE!!!!
    Oh, and I've worked out why I love your style. It's a bit like reading an autobiography- which is a style you don't see on Mibba and it's refreshing to read. ^^
    And you can bet that I'll keep reading, just as long as you keep writing!!
    July 6th, 2009 at 11:54pm
  • TattooLady

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    Freakazoid!:
    I love the way your writing her. ^^
    Seriously, it's epic.
    And I totally agree- for some bizarre reason, when you get older you're expected to stop discovering the joys of pretending that an empty cardboard box is a car.
    She shaved her eyebrows. :D It made me giggle. ^^
    Loved it m'dear! xo
    Awesome! I really appreciate your comments and compliments. :D
    Keep readin'! She meets Brian soon. 8)
    July 4th, 2009 at 11:55pm
  • Freaka.

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    I love the way your writing her. ^^
    Seriously, it's epic.
    And I totally agree- for some bizarre reason, when you get older you're expected to stop discovering the joys of pretending that an empty cardboard box is a car.
    She shaved her eyebrows. :D It made me giggle. ^^
    Loved it m'dear! xo
    July 4th, 2009 at 11:07pm
  • Freaka.

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    Cry Poor Amanda.
    But this was really good. You got right inside her head. It feels disjointed and slightly cramped in there, but you managed it. Clap
    Bravo!!! *subscribes*
    July 3rd, 2009 at 10:48pm
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