Thursday Mourning - Comments

First I have to say I loved the layout it was very simple yet so complex at the same... It works well though with the contrast and feel of the story...

I could feel the pain and emotion she was emmiting I could sense how she felt and how hard it was for her to grive I felt bad though because everyone kept telling her how she needed to get over it he was special to her and she may never get fully over the pain she was feeling.

And I have to say the guy she saw way creepy I felt like he was stalking het yet some how he wanted to help which is strange and creepy at the same time I loved the ending though it was so sweet and it seemed like he could be just what she needed to get over her Ex,

All in all I loved this whole story and would love to see more to it like if she ever does get over the dead guy, will she hook up with the new guy how will her family react... I could go on and on lol

P.s I'm sorry it took so long to get this to you.

Much <3 Kat

First I have to say I loved the layout it was very simple yet so complex at the same... It works well though with the contrast and feel of the story...

I could feel the pain and emotion she was emmiting I could sense how she felt and how hard it was for her to grive I felt bad though because everyone kept telling her how she needed to get over it he was special to her and she may never get fully over the pain she was feeling.

And I have to say the guy she saw way creepy I felt like he was stalking het yet some how he wanted to help which is strange and creepy at the same time I loved the ending though it was so sweet and it seemed like he could be just what she needed to get over her Ex,

All in all I loved this whole story and would love to see more to it like if she ever does get over the dead guy, will she hook up with the new guy how will her family react... I could go on and on lol

P.s I'm sorry it took so long to get this to you.

Much <3 Kat

sad...but happy. Nice setting, background... you really got into the head of the person ho's suffering

:o :o
awwwwwwwwwww
my god that was amazing!
I loved how you used the swing and how it related to her mourning over her dead lover.
wow brilliant job!
I could picture everything you explained very clearly,
well thought out!

I wuold look back at a few grammatical errors, but hey overall a fabulous job!