Moving On Up - Comments

i LOVED it! and the ending was just how it should be! I love this story so much and i cant wait until the next update! :)

So glad her dad gave Nick his blessing!
Loved the update and can't wait for more!

This was really long. Seriously. I'm giving myself huge props for finishing it, but it was so worth it. :)
So, anyway, all the best with Manchester with Nick. It'll be awesome. I'm in Wales as well already, getting ready for school, with no idea when it's gonna start ;)
The chapter was adorable. Especially the one in the beginning with the running and the water. So adorable :) I so want someone like Nick in this story. With all the lovey-dovey stuff.
And, Nick and Charlene's dad made up! Yey! Their world is now complete. So amazingly adorable.
Love those two.
Oh, have you and Nick in real life done the water thing as well? It's cute :)
Love it and can't wait for an update (and the one shot ideas are amazing) and whenever you can update!

it's sad that the story is ending soon but the one shot idea is good. I'm glad her dad finally came around!

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:D i've been in love with this story from the start!! this chapter was super duper cute and im so glad that her dad has finally come around!!!(:
please update soon!! i can't wait for the next chapter!

Awe!!!!

hate the authors note because it is so horrible to think the story will end soon. please do something else rather than end the story, i beg you to please not end this story. it is TOO good to see come to an end just yet. the one shots are not a great idea, a sequel, well sequel to the sequel, is not a bad idea about life after marriage. please do something other than end the story. please please please do not end the story.

Cant for ur update I totally fell in love w/ ur story!

haha when you said that most of the readers didn't like Mark, i felt kind of guilty... haha i really liked him... But i do admit that Nick and Charlene are adorable:) Especially Nick. He's like the gentle giant in a sort:)

i love the story UPDATE

i love the story UPDATE

Wow Mark. Didnt see that coming. But it makes sense
Great chapter, I like all the foot ball guys. 'coolest girlfriend ever' lol
and the whole 'you get all gangster on me' line: just awesome. i laughed!!

great update!!

loved the last two updates! so good!
aw I missed Mark even though I'm all for Narlene! :)

maaaark. that was a surprise. I freaked out a little though. Just a bit. :P
I thought there was gonna be some drama. We're good, we're stable.
Thank you Charlotte's boyfriend. Way to be all athletic. :)

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Changed my About :D I've been on Mibba for a while... apparently :)
I figured those two have had enough drama for a lifetime, now's a good time to stop. But hey, it's your story.
And you'll get into Manchester. Along with Nick. And you'll live this sickly perfect life. Everyone will be jealous/ envious. Blah, blah, blah. SURE OF THAT :) You're just one of those people, who have it easy (I know it wasn't easy at first, but it's easier now, right?) or are just plain lucky. Unfortunately, I am none of those, so my life is destined to suck.
ooooh, Narlene one-shots - love them :D
btw, in the latest chapters, one of her friends told Charlene that Narlene is so concentrated on each other and they don't notice any other pretty people (or something like that). Did someone say something like that to you? Cause you're beautiful, Nick's probably handsome - two gorgeous people together... you probably don't need anyone else.
And the Noo Kool in the background of my pic is actually a name of a school in Estonia. My BFF graduated it last year. In translation it's School of Nõo or something (Nõo School).

I don't think Charlene would betray Nick like that, seeing as she was cheated on twice (yeah, I'm bringing up Changing the Rules), and knows how it would feel to Nick if she were to do something like that, so I have faith in "Narlene" though I know that drama is not far. I just hope nothing too drastic occurs. It was a bit refreshing seeing Mark, though I hope that's the last time Charlene sees him (I know that's harsh, but I'm a faithful "Narlene" supporter).

seems as though it has been forever since the last update so i am very glad to to read the next chapter such great chemistry between the two, cant wait for the next chapter

You don't have to get the next one out before you go on holiday, I know how busy it is before. So, if you don't have the time, chill, it's not like your biggest fans would leave you :)
I absolutely adore Mark. He's such a sweetheart and I'd love a guy like that. Although... I do like cuddling ;)
The chapter? Adorable, as always. It always is with Narlene.
Stupid question, but when's the story ending? They have their own place, dog and all that jazz. All that's missing are marriage and kids. Basically :D
Love it and can't wait for an update!
PS! Have fun on your holiday!