Get Your Gun. - Comments

You really must write more about these guys. :3

Hi! Thanks for entering No Rules!
Extremely short entry, so I haven't got much to say, but your spelling and grammar were perfect.
Characterisation was also immediate, and well-written.
I just would have loved something a bit longer to really sink my teeth into, y'know?
Anyway, good luck with the contest and check back at the forum page later this evening for the results.

Love this so much, it's really well written.

I like how you portrayed Ole and Emil in this.

Extremely good for a first time writting this pairing.

Hopefully it's not your only ... :P

Haha, I was just going to search for DS stories, and your story was first on the story page :XD /random

I think this pairing is so adorable, and you did a good job for it being your first time! :D (Even though I fail to imagine Emil as innocent... :tehe: )

I feel sorry for Emil getting 'thrown out' after Kitten comes along, but who can really blame Whip for that? :tehe:

Bone/Nighty is so sweet together You wrote this very well, and I would have wanted more chapters.