The Take Over, The Break's Over - Comments

Still eagerly awaiting an update!

:D

More like Pete can't hurt him, Abster!
Ben's a professional football play remember. He pushes 250 pound guys out of his way, and pumps iron for a living. Meanwhile Pete's a little puny, compared to big Ben anyway, Pete would get crushed, unless he takes off, in light of the fact that he could really get killed in this situation. Maybe Ben won't even touch him? Maybe Pete will hurt Ben without puting himself in any physical danger, or vice versa. You'll have to wait and see :D

Keep reading guys! You're awesome!:D

Love, Carrie ♥

Just found your story, and it's great so far. Do you still need characters?

=O
he can't hurt pete though that was a very twatish move on his behalf!
more soon please

Mrs Abster Bryar xXx

awwwwwwww
cute update
more soon maybe?

Mrs Abster Bryar xXx

loved the update

Hehe, chocolate ice cream with chocolate chips!! Hmm! AWESOME!

Sorry i took so long to comment.. i was at a friends house...

That last update was....

confuzing...

omg! no pete, anna loves u!!

great update, more please hunni

My god...Dont let Pete give her up!!!!!! Bad Pete!!!!! *smacks with a spork*

I like it! Interesting plot... DON'T YOU DARE EVEN THINK ABOUT NOT WRITING IT!!

Name: Emiy-Jane Miri Lanna
Age you want to be: 25
Height: 4'9 (sadly that is about how tall I am....)
Do you want to be Single or Taken?: Taken by the one and only Frankie Iero
Personality: Hyperactive like Frankie. She does weird things like Mikey... like sticks forks in toasters and such. Always seems to be bouncing, loves coffee and chocolate.
Appearance: Long, red, wavy hair, eyes such a dark blue they look purple. Short, pale with freckles.

aww, it made me smile:)

abixxx

It's so ...happy. It's hard not to smile when reading it. Glad you decided not to stop writing it.

Wicked Carrie.
Truly Brilliant :D

i looved the update:) keep it up

abixxx

i love it it's brill i love it can i be a chricter lz? i wuv patrick and andy outta fob they rock the hardest,

abixxx

Sweet! 19 readers and 2 subscribers!! I'm stoked! :D
I'll update as soon as I can but, Ive been camping and stuff, so I'll probably get a chance to update of Friday or Saturday! :D
*hugs all readers, gives all cookies*

great job!!!

update soon?

I loved it

Okay so I didn't get to update as soon as I expected. My boyfriend was over all day yesterday and a bunch of my friends were here all day today, but it's here! Yey Updates! :D♥

12 readers and 1 subscriber, this story deserves an update!
Yess. I'm very easy to make happy and to make update all you gotta do is comment, or subscribe and you got one. tehehe. I'll update soon! :D