Dannnnnng! That was intense... i was literally crossing my fingers hoping shed wake up in time! i didnt wanna accidently read ahead cuz i was excited so i had to block the bottom of the screem with my hand!!! nice job! cant wait for more
yikes.... sorry ive been gone such a fretful long time but i just read the whole thing again and all i have to say is: wow. Like, not sure if you know how rediculasly awesome and amazing this story is. i am utterly utterly enthralled!!! must say I LOVE PETER DONT BREAK HIS HEART!!! Haha well it might make for a thicker plot but as long as he comes out on top in the end (which im sure he will) im good :) nice job!!! ill keep better track next time haha
okay PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update.............btw i found a book called the child thief by Brom haven't read it but it looked like a good but dark version of peter pan!!
awesome chapter!