D: Dude you have to write a sequel. I dont think you can leave it off like that. Zayley needs to be made. Stupid Brian ruining them. Hes such a icky person. =/ Humph. Please write a sequel. I beg of you. =] :cute: xx
I wondered what going to happened next, because if Zacky walks in on them like this, it might be the end of him and Hayley. I can't believe that there is only one chapter left to this story, well I hope you considering into make a sequel, but that ok if you don't. Great story.
YOU THINK THERE IS GOING TO BE ONE CHAPTER?!?!? ARE YOU INSANE? There cant be just one more chapter! There better be a flippin sequel because it cant end like this! Its not suppose to end like this! It isnt suppose to end as a Briayley! (haha laaaaame) its suppose to end as a Zayley!!! D: Please tell me that Zacky isnt going to walk in on them. It would break his heart...he started to fall for her and now this! Its going to kill him. Or at least I hope Hayley realizes what is going on before everything happens. This is a wonderful story and I really do hope there is a sequel. <33 Update soon!! :cute: xx
FUUUDGE NUUUUUTS!!! Briaaan! Ugh! :omfg: Hayley get away now! Run far far away and dont stop. Go find Zacky and become ZAYLEY! Its the ultimate goal anymore, dont you know?! Brian is only trying to ruin it! Brian you jealous over muffin sized pina colada!! I hate you. Why cant you let the one you 'love' be with the one he likes. I love this story I really do. I just hope that everything works out ok even after. . . OMG!!! omgno: HES GOING TO MAKE A MOVE ON HAYLEY, THUS ZACKY FINDING THEM! DD: Now he wont want to be with her. He'll going crawling back to Brian. Brian will get what he wants. Hayley will feel all crappy for what she did. This is not going to be be good. Not at all. I really hope that it isnt going to be the case. Please dont let that happen, even though it would create more drama. . .but really it would stink. =/ Well please update soon (I am stoked you did so quickly already and wouldnt mind that again). <3 :cute: xx
BRIAN!!!!! omgno: KSNDKNSKCKCLNIDWS D:OSDLKLDJDSKJS:LJK OJLKSJLK AHHHHHHH! Brian you ASDFJKL;!!! You make me mad. Just when Zayley was about to FREAKING HAPPEN BRIAN JUST HAD TO STEP IN! D: Of course Im not mad at you. . . .entirely. You did make it happen. Buuut UGHHHH! Can you blame me for being aggrivated?! I wonder what Brian is up to. I bet you anything he is out to brwak up Zayley so they'll just be Zacky and Hayley. I dunt like that.. Poor Zacky though. Hayley isn't going to get the chance to ask him out. He totally woulda said yes. Then they would have fell in love and everything would have been happy! I feel bad though for not backing up Zacky and Brian anymore. But Brian is an askamuwichich. Yes I said it. Humph. Pleeease update soon! I am dying here! :cute: <----Update in the name of the cute smilie. =) xx
I think my favourite bit in the last chapter would of had to be when Brian walked out from the bunk area, and just walked straight past Zacky to follow everyone else. I felt soo sorry for Brian :(
Zacky is my wittle-itty-bitty cutie, and I love him to death, but I can't help but feel sorry for Brian. his heart is aching, and I wanna make it better, but I can't :(
And I apologize for the lack of comments on my part. Have only been able to read them from my mobile lately. But here I am and with vengeance! *insert giggles here* xD Anyway. Cute. I really do hope that Zayley happens soon. <3 They are so adorable with each other. Great update!! Update soon!? <3333 :cute: