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  • Krista?

    Krista? (100)

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    Thank you :)
    July 8th, 2009 at 07:14pm
  • Chewy Cheese

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    Ouch. What a creep. Very well written ^_^
    July 8th, 2009 at 07:13pm
  • Dancing Caveman

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    Holy turn of events, Batman!

    So, I was bouncing along laughing at the descriptions of the nasty guy in the story, when all the sudden he turned into an almost-rapist. That part wasn't so funny. I was like, "Woah. This is turning out not good..."

    But then the last line made it funny again, though I have to say that I feel bad for the girl.

    Anyway, I really liked the story, and I liked how you incorporated your emotion. Definitely loved the random events that happened, and how it turned from funny to bad to kind-of-funny-but-mostly-unfair.

    Good job.
    July 7th, 2009 at 07:47am
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