I really like this, if your stuck the next chapter could be Gerard beig really hurt by Tom somehow, if you wanted to love things quickly Tom could say Gerard is not perfect never will be he is hopeless etc and breaks up with, Gerard desperately needs comfort but canny go to Frank so he attempts suicide or maybe running away? Yeah running away andaybe Frank can find him and then leave it on a cliff hanger!
just read the first chapter, pretty amazing :) i like the way u write, and the voice is really good. i was kinda hoping for a little more time between frank and gerard, instead of it being so sudden (the kiss and the room sharing.) sorta expected frankie to sleep in gee's room, but not holding him :P still really liked it though, and am continuing reading.
Just hit chapter 6 and am utterly in love. : ) You guys write so well and the story is very real. Your depiction of Gerard is absolutely adorable. Can't wait to read the rest of it! Stupid AP Psych test in the morning... >.<
I dont even NEED to say if i like this or not.... just read it yourself and you'll know EXACTLY how much i love it!!!!! EXCEPT!!!!!! the fact that *whines* YOU HAVE!!! TO UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOHOOOOHOOOOHOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!! Its too awesome to be sitting on edge waiting for!!!!!! Oh and Harley.... Hurry with starting on the 4th chapter of our story pwease :)
I commented. but just for the eyelashes! lol, actually no, I really liked it. It was cute. But I hate Tom more now then I did last chapter. And I'm glad Gerard took the risk. And that he drank the coffee. I also agree with the commenter above me, the background is amazing. I love it too. It's verryverry cute.
Yay!!!!!!!!!!! You updated!!!!!!!!!!! Did I ever tell you that I love the background?? If I didn't, well, I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! haha. Update soon!!!!!!!!!!
D'awww! I can't help but read parts of this and go "They are so fricking cute!" and then start hating Tom more than I thought was ever possible. Subscription has been made. Can't wait for that email :3