I love this. Paul and John are so adorable; what a pity they can't be open about their relationship. Please update this when you can, I'm really eager to see how it all plays out. I can safely say that I am utterly enthralled by this little piece of writing (:
Whoops, that made no sense: "you posted again", that was supposed to be "you posted it again". Oh and "It's my Buddy Holly look," is my favourite line from the trailer (haha, so lame). Good choice in using that, hehe.
Oh gosh, i've been way behind on this, silly Mibba not sending me update notifications! Anyway, John and Paul are really adorable together! I can't wait for more.
Also, I've been watching the Nowhere Boy trailer so much lately and I finally stopped and then you posted again. I really need that movie to come out here before I explode or something, I can't wait :P
O_O >.> <.< -screams- OMFG! NOWHERE BOY!!!!!!! XDDDDDDDDDDDDD Is it just me? Or does the guy look more like Pete Best then John Lennon? :s And the guy playing Paul looks nothing like him! He's like a freaking ten-year-old. .______. Well, I guess we can't expect the best, eh? Just be thankful they're actually making a movie about John. Ahhh! I totally want go see it now. But I now I'm going to bawl. t.t So, this chapter was nice. I'm glad Mandi finally got some spotlight. I have a feeling that either John or Paul, or maybe both (!), like Sophie. But we all know they're just hot for thr French accent. PAULIE'S GETTING A PRESENT! PAULIE'S GETTING A PRESENT!
I totally sat here for like two minutes, trying to think of a comment worthy of this chapter. Paul and John nearly got caught. :o Glad they didn't, though. But why did old Jim have to interrupt just when Paul was about to ... you know ... come. XDDD The poor lad. And John's thinking about giving Paul and early birthday prezzie, eh? >;] I bet Paul will enjoy it immensely. John: Master of Surprise Butt-Sex. I totally know who's at the door. But I won't tell. My lips are sealed.
I really hope they do tell George and I also hope that everything turns out okay for John and Paul (: I can't wait for more, this is kind of addictive.
YOU FINALL UPDATED THIS! Omfg, I am so happeh! I missed my dose of J/P slash. Aw, this was sweet, with Paul and John talking about falling in love. And Georgie supects something? :o It'd have to be him, though. He's so quiet! You finally wrote in Mandi! I'm glad she found someone. =)
Fuck. I kind of wanted it to be me who John was saving. Lmfao. Such a bad-ass. XD He' Paulie's hero. But I feel bad for Paul too. Please don't make him out to be dead! I'm seriously biting my nails in worry.
Oh gosh, I felt so sorry for poor Paul in this chapter but at least, John was there to save him! I thought it was pretty bad-ass, what John did to save Paul really.
Oh, poor Paul John's there to make it all better. (he's very good at that.) I hope you're in a better mood now, <3 , smile, play music, eat ice cream read the "Octupus' Garden" story again. (always makes me laugh.) hope this comment made you feel better, this chapter makes me sad too.
Okay, first off .... that picture scared the crap out of me lmfao. o_o Anywho, this chapter was indeed hot. >;] Mygod, where would we be without slash to fire our overactive imaginations and libido drives? I thank you a lot Sam, for writing this story lol. It's pure awesomeness.
IT'S ABOUT FUCKING TIME!!!!!!!!! lmao y'see how excited I am to hear about your writing? that's exactly what went through my head when i got the email. It was hot I cant lie to you. I liked this one especially when John was "making sure everything fit". Ugh, I love the imagery.
True story here. When I read this chapter, I actually (no lies) yelled out "YES!". And like my mom, grandma, and aunt were all in the kitchen while I was in my brother's room with the door open. They all stopped their conversation and craned their necks to look at me. They were just like: >.> <.< LMAO. I woke up the kids. Haha.
Anywho, I agree with everyone on here about the whole John/Stu thing lol. Stu was never right for John. I mean, John needed someone to put him in his place when he needed it and Stu certainly wouldn't have done that. He was too ....... meek? I don't know if that's the right word, but in line with Jami, he let John walk all over him. And while John might've liked that, he really needed someone who could stand his ground against him. And we all know Paul was, if not totally perfect, at least alright for the job.
P.S. I love the new layout. Jami and I were actually thinking of using that same picture for I'll Get You, but decided it wasn't right since it was John who was facing towards the camera. =) But this layout is awesome. I'm thinking, since Sara hasn't been on for a while, could you help me design a layout for this new story of mine? I'm not posting it yet, but I'd like to have a layout ready for when the time comes.