July 13th, 2010 at 01:35am
Pangaea - Comments
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Filthy Vonn :)April 24th, 2010 at 06:00pm
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I haven't read Waycest in forever but I really liked this, especially using Pangaea to describe Mikey's feelings. And of course the sex scene was hot. :shifty
Very well done.August 10th, 2009 at 06:49am -
That was beautiful, amazing, and so hot.
I loved it so effing much!
July 17th, 2009 at 09:01am -
I love this story. It was very good. You, yourself are very good at writting.
Acctually, it was so perfect and clear that It reminds me of me and my best friend. We started out like that - with a kiss...
...And, I like how well you know Mikey, hardly anyone would think how you know he would in the most strangest moments - about Pangaea, and stuff, you know?July 16th, 2009 at 06:33pm -
*dies*
*resurrected*
I loved that so much it made my heart stop.
It was sexxy...yet so sweet.
Words honestly cannot describe how I feel about it.July 13th, 2009 at 06:41am -
Using Pangaea was genious, just like the other comments said. I never would have thought to use it to express how Mikey felt. It was genious, it really was. You're an amazing writer. Don't stop writing, please. You have a true talent.July 12th, 2009 at 04:35am
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I absolutely adored that. Everyone's already mentioned the Pangea element but I feel I have to too.
At first I was wondering what Pangea had to do with it, which of course had me reading on. I wondered maybe if it was just one mention but I soon realised that it was very a important and also a very beautiful sentiment in the story. It shows both Mikey and Gerard's discomfort and confusion as well as suggesting a new age, possibly the death of their brotherhood, like the death of the dinosaurs, and the beginning of something greater (mankind and their relationship). So it creates a mournful atmosphere too, that even though they are happy with there new relationship, they both know their brotherhood is dead.
I really enjoyed this, well done!
xoxoxoJuly 11th, 2009 at 02:26am -
that was awesome! incredibly wonderful! you know how to write!July 9th, 2009 at 05:58am
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Holy shit! Your way of writing really made my eyes water... ^^July 7th, 2009 at 05:51pm
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absolutely wonderful.July 7th, 2009 at 02:25pm
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wow. that was great. long and had meaning I love how the whole continental drift thing came into play.July 7th, 2009 at 06:23am
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wow!!
that was incredible! you're writing is amazing!!
i loved every word!! =]
as previous comments have said, i loved how you used Pangaea. it was really clever and original!!July 6th, 2009 at 10:16pm -
That was amazing!!July 6th, 2009 at 07:22pm
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I agree with the post above.
Using Pangaea was a great way to express Mikey's feelings toward the issue, very original.
Well-written too, great job. :)July 6th, 2009 at 06:05pm -
You're a very clever writer ^_^
I absolutely loved the way you used Pangea to represent Mikey's feelings and thought processes and such. it was complete genius!
Well done ^_^July 6th, 2009 at 01:39pm
I've read this many times and I guess I just, uh, forgot to comment? *facepalm*
I love it.
There is just no word to fully express how much.
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That ^^^ will have to do for now.