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HeyyJeannie (100)

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I just read this and it was amazing, this seriously made me cry, but anyway your writing is really good. :)

August 20th, 2011 at 04:49am

catastrophe. (100)

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Jeez! I just read this today. EPIC AMAZING.

Oh and I totally agree with your authors note in 20. I don't read those stories either. It just doesn't feel right.

August 16th, 2009 at 04:58am

kathleenxx (100)

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I wasn't lying, I really am bawling.
Such an amazing story.
Tonight Im gonna reread the whole thing through and hopefully not cry yet again at the ending :(.

valenciaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa<3

August 14th, 2009 at 11:55pm

oh dakota (100)

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SO WEIRD. I thought of shane and the good life while reading the second to last chapter, then read that authors note. Hmmm.

Great story! I loved it! <3

August 14th, 2009 at 06:21pm

erratic (100)

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I'm definitely on the verge of tears right now.
This was an amazing story.
Sad ending, but I loved it nonetheless.

August 14th, 2009 at 02:53pm

flippinjeans (100)

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i can't believe it is over
such an amazing story

August 14th, 2009 at 06:02am

kathleenxx (100)

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what NOOO. :( Im going to fucking ball like a baby if shes really dead D:

August 14th, 2009 at 02:40am

Sore Winner (100)

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oh my gosh!!!
shes dead?!?!
holy crap!
i love this story btw :)

August 13th, 2009 at 08:19pm

oh dakota (100)

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Wow. That was the first fan fic to ever make me cry.
Omg. :(

August 13th, 2009 at 05:27am

Erinnnn.xo (100)

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I almost cried!
but then I realized that unless Jack has lost his marbles Callie can't be dead
because the first chapter includes her speaking and is a month after her accident.

August 13th, 2009 at 05:06am

DiamondGirl827 (100)

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So after some investigating I've come to the conclusion that Callie isn't dead. Cause if the first chapter took place over a month after Callie "dies" then our poor boy Jack is losing his damn mind in the first chapter.

August 13th, 2009 at 02:35am

erratic (100)

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Once Jack mentioned an intersection I knew that she was going to crash.
But I didn't think she was going to DIE.

I almost cried when I read that last line.

I have no idea where you're going with the next chapter, but I can't wait to read it.

August 13th, 2009 at 01:12am

Erinnnn.xo (100)

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;O can't believe it's almost overrr

August 11th, 2009 at 03:42pm

erratic (100)

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Aww, I'm sorry to hear about your indefinite hiatus after this is over.
;(

Anywho, I can't wait for the next chapter.
"Intense" updates are always the best.

August 11th, 2009 at 09:25am

oh dakota (100)

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aw i love the cutesy chapters :)
whats your real name, btw?
or do i call you mr. president?

August 10th, 2009 at 04:58pm

erratic (100)

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Chapters about Warped Tour are always so fun ;)
Jack and Callie are too adorable for words.

Only 3 chapters left?
I'm excited to read them, but I'll be sad when this is over.

August 10th, 2009 at 07:39am