This is without a doubt the best Bike fiction I have ever read. You have an incredible gift for suspense, and for weaving a plot with real depth within just a few powerful paragraphs. I love your descriptions, and the way you write the dialogue.
This story is amazing. It's been a while since I've found a well-written Billie/Mike fic...I'm already hooked on this one and I can't wait to read more.
Jeez, Adrienne's a beast. I always pictured her as the kind, gentle type, not the "Bow down to me or I'll kick your ass" type. *laughs* That was a suprising change in character.
As usual, awesome!! <3 Keep it up, I need another Aly-fiction fix. =]
..........you rock my world, you know that? <4569 this was just so asdfghjkl SO GOOD. you're so freaking amazing, and the idea alone is just incredible, but then you write it so WONDERFULLY. I love you and I love this and asdfghjkl you're amazing :')