God and the Deathbat - Comments, page 3

carpe-vengeance (100)

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lovely is all i could sum it up too :D <-- my face durning the story haha

March 18th, 2011 at 08:15am

Synfullytwysted (100)

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Oh lawd, you got me going again during that update!! Yet again a beautifully written chapter. From the vows they had both written to the way they are around each other, it was simply amazing. They're perfect for one another. However, on a slightly more serious note, I wonder just what Val was eluding to when she said about there being stuff that was going on, it sounds so serious, and there's a part of me that knows it's going to involve Brian and Indy.

Truly wonderful hun, and I'm so looking forward to the next update :) <33 xx

March 18th, 2011 at 06:58am

choirgirlx3 (100)

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I LOVE this story. i want more!

March 16th, 2011 at 10:48pm

carpe-vengeance (100)

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Yeah an update! I was thinking about this story the other day and when I got the notice I smiled big :D
I thought it was extremely adorable xD

March 16th, 2011 at 07:15am

cherryxbombx (100)

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I have only recently started reading/ subscribing to this story and I cannot stop! You are an amazing writer I love every part of this story, keep up the marvelous work!

March 16th, 2011 at 05:59am

XtremeFairy (100)

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I love the chapter in brian pov...aww he broke down in tears seeing her I cant wait for the second part :)

March 16th, 2011 at 04:17am

i_love_to_syn (100)

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Oh my god, that was beautiful. WHY YOU NO WRITE FROM BRI'S POV MORE OFTEN?!!
Okay, anywhoo, that was freaking amazing. I have nervous butterflies in my tummy, and that is a sure sign of a fucking brilliant writer.

March 16th, 2011 at 03:10am

dawn8279 (100)

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more more more

March 16th, 2011 at 02:50am

Tilers Haner (100)

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Brian's not the only one it tears! That was a beautiful chapter Hun, and to have it from Brian's POV and to see just how much he loves her was just perfect.
I loved it Hun, and can't wait for the next update <3 xx

March 16th, 2011 at 12:04am

cattfeine (100)

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Oh my gosh!!! He broke down, its so sweet. More please!!

March 15th, 2011 at 10:34pm

Fictional.Reality (100)

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I loved this update!!!
So happy that they are finally getting married
and i can't wait for part two
<3 Michele

March 15th, 2011 at 09:46pm

justhannah; (100)

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Nawww :,) that was too...cute
Loved the update so much!

March 15th, 2011 at 08:53pm

Lover.Dearest (100)

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NBLSNVLKFNVIELKDNVIEBD
THERESA.
THIS UPDATE.
UGH.
I sew smart for giving you the idea of a POV switch ;)
But holy fuck bro.
So fuckin good.
NFKFNIRNIWESDKNES
(Totally NOT sitting on your bed as I read this, WHAT are you talking about?;D)

March 15th, 2011 at 08:37pm

MamaZ (100)

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Awe this was so damn cute. I loved it, Brian crying really was a nice touch! For a moment I thought Val was Michelle or something from the way Brian said she was acting, but I doubt that after he said she died. I can't wait for them to tie the knot!

March 15th, 2011 at 08:11pm

mysoul4jimmy (100)

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Awesome chapter! Please post next part of wedding soooooon! So unfair to make us wait! Lol! Jk! Love this story like crazy! :)

March 15th, 2011 at 07:55pm

totallyawesome (100)

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Oh my gosh, he broke down into tears :3
The POV change was great for that chapter, and I can't wait to see what will happen next!

March 15th, 2011 at 07:08pm

artemis1883 (100)

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SQUUEEEEEEEEE!! I love it! I love the POV switch, nicely written from Brian's point of view. And I'm glad he confronted her about Michelle, and how much he's NOT thinking of her.

LOVE IT! Can't wait for the next part. Gorgeous wedding, too, btw.

March 15th, 2011 at 06:55pm

Synfullytwysted (100)

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Damn you Theresa!! I'm sitting here welling up, because that was a truly beautiful update *sniffles* Having it from Brian point of view was just perfect, being able to get a look at just how he feels about Indy, and the love between them is something that cannot be denied. And then to have him crying at the end when he saw her.....just fucking perfect!

I absolutely loved it hun, and am so looking forward to the next part :) xxx

March 15th, 2011 at 06:25pm

itbemet (100)

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“I would die for you in a second, and I don’t care how dumb that sounds or how ridiculous. You are the only girl for me, I can’t think of my life without you. Each time I even try to contemplate it, my heart hurts.”

Sniffle, that just made me so sappy. <3

D'awwwwww, he was crying. OMG! I loved this so much! Can't wait for more. It was the most awesome surprise of the day! xox

March 15th, 2011 at 06:17pm

All Over You (100)

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Update sooon please! I am in love with this story! You are an amazing writer! Keep it up!!! :D

March 7th, 2011 at 01:47am